The Burning of Ice

The Burning of Ice

Beta: Aubrey san THANK YOU!!!

As you all can see, I have finally a beta for this one here now. Since I dont know what happened to Tina chan, some one other asked me to beta this story for me.
I really pary and hope Tina chan is not angry at me but I have the bad feeling she is. Hopefully I am wrong, because I do not know why and it would be very sad.
Suryallee

Type: Continuation, Romance, Adventure, Action, Hentai,
Pairings: Keiko/ Touya, Hiei/ Shizuru
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters or the story of Yu Yu Hakusho itself. I only wrote down my imagination, that's all!
Warnings: Hentai, Adult situations, Out written sexual acts, Oral, Penetration, Blood, M/F, Waff, Fluff, some plot bunny jumping around, I don't know!
Rated: NY17, Not for children!
Description:
Touya wants Keiko as his mate and gets his chance after Yusuke splits up with her because he loves Botan now. Meanwhile Hiei begins to find out that he likes Shizuru as more as a friend.

Chapter 2/ Beta version {New Beta version not that the other was bad or so, but I send her the old versions of the story and she did them anew]

I have to tell you before you read this, that English isn't my native speech. So please don't be mad at me, if I have translated the story from German to English not well enough.
I have tried my best so I hope everyone can read it.
I really hope!
Tell me what you thing of it, OK. Because it was my first try.
Please enjoy the story and tell me what you think.
(Oh, if anyone there who can help me with the English? if so, send me a mail.)
-- Suryallee -
The Burning of Ice
Her viewpoint

Dear diary,
He was staring at me again! I don't believe it! It can't be true, can it? Every day since he has start training with the others at Genkai´s temple ground, it is the same. I come here, he starts looking at me when no one is looking in his or my direction and then stops before anyone notices.
Well now you can say it's only on my imagination or so, but I have caught his glare many times now and I am quite sure I don't imagine it!
But why does he continue to do this? I don't even know him. Only the name, it is Touja. Maybe he remembers?
No it can't be! He was unconscious that night. He can't have seen me really.
Good night dear diary. I will try to sleep now and tomorrow will be a busy day for me at school.
Until next time,
Keiko

Three day's later
Dear diary,
Today it was the same again!
I don't get it! Why is he always doing that? Yesterday it was the same, staring at me as today and the day before yesterday to!!
Every time he thinks I don't see it, he settles his gaze on me, and avoids my eyes when I try to catch his.
The funny thing about this is it seems that no one else has noticed him doing it!
It's really frustrating, you now?
I mean, I'm really sure about this but I don't know why he is doing that.
Tomorrow I'll ask him what he wants from me. But I have to admit he has a very nice appearance and a nice voice too.

I hope he never reads my diary!!
But it is true, only his eyes are a little bit scary! They have no iris inside! Funny, ne?
I mean I have seen scarier eyes on demons to get that nervous about his eyes. But I can't help myself, when I see his eyes I get a chilling feeling inside me.
Ok, he is an ice yokai, so you would think that they have to be cold, but it isn't so.
Yukina is some sort of an ice demon too, and I don't get that kind of feeling from her! Only a warm one. Maybe it's because she is my friend,
Maybe it's not. I don't know.

You could say that I had enough bad experiences with yokai to last the rest of my ningen life! And you'd be true with that statement, but I can't help myself when it comes to him. Sometimes, when I see him he seems so lonely and sad. It's mostly then no one is looking directly at him or he thinks he's alone. Don't get me wrong, I don't mean I like him that way or anything.
Oh who was I kidding?! I mean, he is a very attractive guy in his own way. The same height as me, and he has such a handsome face too.
When I first saw him at the Dark Tournament, I was glad that Kurama hadn't killed him. I was completely shocked when Touya asked him to finish him off after the fight was done!

Later I found out that he had a personality that I could get along with quite well. Touya is very polite, very different from a Special Person I know! I was glad at that time that I had a boyfriend.
Oh, that's bad! Have I really written this?
I really hope no one ever read this! It's so embarrassing!
Maybe he'll stop staring at me if I ignore him for awhile?
But why does it feels so nice when he watches me? Maybe I will ask Yukina about this, or Shizuru. They must know him better then me.
And maybe Shizuru will know why I feel me so strange around him, and why he keeps staring at me!
Yusuke has never done that to me.
Until next time,

Keiko


Please let her and me a nice review, she deserves it for her work!
After all, my betas do offer their time to make it better to read for you all and that is, in my opinion worth a word.
Suryallee