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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wha? That`s it? Awww. It was interesting. Please keep going,I like the story so far.
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories and this one is no exception. It was well writen. Please update soon.
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May 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi I really like you'r story so far please update soon
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story so far. This review is for the entire 1-13 or 12 can't remember but anyways the story is going great. The pairings are something I have never really thought about before but that is a good thing not a bad thing ^^; Great story update soon!!!
-InTheShadows.
-InTheShadows.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Love it!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this interaction of Hiei's and how he now protective of Kuwabara. Although if Hie gets Shizuru, then he should stop addressing her brother as Kuwabara, since it's the family name. Once Hiei mates with Shizuru, having no last name himself, he should take theirs, and be a Kuwabara himself. Even if he doesn't go by their family name, as a brother-in-law (of a sort) he should call him by his given name, Kazuma.
Thank you for the original veiw of why Kuwabara couldn't be with Yukina. Other writers often put Yukina with other males as teh reason why she's not with Kuwabra. But this is the fist time I've seent hat follows her racial history. As Koorime they do not need males for reproduction, they do that by themselves, asexually. Therefor a pur-blooded Koorime has only one parent, the mother. But it makes sense that the females would pair up to make rearing the child easier.
I can't wait for Hiei to find someone for Kazuma.
Thank you for the original veiw of why Kuwabara couldn't be with Yukina. Other writers often put Yukina with other males as teh reason why she's not with Kuwabra. But this is the fist time I've seent hat follows her racial history. As Koorime they do not need males for reproduction, they do that by themselves, asexually. Therefor a pur-blooded Koorime has only one parent, the mother. But it makes sense that the females would pair up to make rearing the child easier.
I can't wait for Hiei to find someone for Kazuma.
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop now, for Kami's sake!!! This is just toooooo HOT! I love Touya And Keiko together, but had never even considered Hiei and Shizuru. I always thought of her more with Kurama, but this definetly has possibilities. Please keep the chappies coming. I can't wait to see how these two hook up. I've read a couple of your other stories and have enjoyed all of them. I know you stress about your English, but I don't have any trouble following your plots. Also, you write some of the best lemons out there.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, looking better and better for each chapter.
You're doing great!!
You're doing great!!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW! Hiei fluff! It is sad about the Kuwabara parents, but I feel so warm and fuzzy hearing that Hiei like Shizuru! KAWAII!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeeeet! I love Hiei¤Shizuru pairings!