Hiei's Harem - Pt. 1 - Establishment
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Yuyu Hakusho › General
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
30
Views:
5,756
Reviews:
28
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0
Currently Reading:
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Scene 9
Unolai, thanks for the review, I guess everyone is entitled to their opinion. I just want to know why such a stigma against scripts? It is still a story, just told in a different format. I'm beyond apologizing for my style. It's the way I've always wrote, probably the way I always will. You like, you like it. You don't, you don't. Isn't a whole lot I can do. I'm going to continue submitting though unless everyone kicks me out. I'm only hoping I'm not violating some AFF rule by submitting in this format. Sorry, didn't mean that to sound rude or mean.
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Scene 9 ------------------------------------------- The Main Cave
* Hiei comes to a stop in front of the vine-covered cave entrance.
Hiei- Let me in, Fox!
* Almost immediately the vines part. Hiei shakes his head as he enters.
Hiei- Why do I always get stuck with Kitsunes?
* Lily twitches an ear as she looks up at him.
Lily- Just lucky, I suppose?
* Hiei grunts and goes over to where Troiyoku is making his mother comfortable.
Hiei- Are you okay, Woman?
* Sarista looks up at him as she pushes Troiyoku away.
Sarista- I'm fine! Stop pawing at me, Boy!
Troiyoku- But, Mother, you're..
Sarista- I know what I am.. Go away before I burn you, Troi!
* Hiei nods as Troiyoku hurries away.
Hiei- Hn.. I don't have to be concerned with you, then.
* Sarista scowls, but then brushes a couple strands of her hair up out of her eyes. She feels the true meaning behind the jagan-wielder's harsh words through their strengthening bond.
Sarista- Your kindness warms my heart, M'Lord.
* Hiei smirks, then turns to look over the others in the cave as Silis and Gamaru arrive. D'Tara stands to look around them frantically.
D'Tara- D'Garo?! Was he injured?! Where is my son?!
Silis- Relax, Aunt 'Tara.
Gamaru- You know he runs when he sees violence.
Troiyoku- He was behind me when I left with Mother.
* Gamaru rolls his eyes.
Gamaru- I'll go find him.
* The Hyena hybrid starts to leave.
Hiei- No. He'll return when he wakes up.
* Everyone looks at Hiei just as the glow behind his bandana disappears.
Hiei- He's passed out not too far away.
* D'Tara shakes her head.
D'Tara- Ahh, my poor, sensitive boy..
Gamaru- He'll get over that. Our new Master says he's going to start training us tomorrow.
* Almost as one, Troiyoku and all the females look toward the Koorime.
Hiei- What? These boys can't be pansies all their lives! I would think you women would want to keep them alive.
* The other females all look toward Sarista. The Alpha Female stands and moves around to face Hiei.
Sarista- So you will train them to become strong.. like you?
Hiei- Hn. I need males I can count on..
Sarista- Then you will kill them yourself when they challenge you for your place?
* Hiei looks back up at Sarista, then toward the three younger males. Silis is the only one that lowers his eyes from the Alpha's gaze.
Hiei- I told you before.. I have no intention of dying anytime soon.. I have no fear of any challenge, either.. Do any of you?
* Troiyoku looks at his brother a bit surprised when he speaks up.
Gamaru- No.. I don't.
* Hiei studies the largest of the boys, then calmly moves up closer to him, keeping Gamaru's deep red eyes.
Hiei- You'd better rest well today,.. boy.. Tomorrow will not be as pleasant for you.
* Hiei glances toward Troiyoku, then turns his back on Gamaru. He pauses a moment, then hmphs and leaves. Saarista looks up at her younger son.
Sarista- If you intend to disrespect our new Alpha I want you gone by High Sun.. Do you understand me?
* Gamaru glances toward his Mother and brother, then leaves the cave quietly.
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Not saying that Unolai's review was malicious because I didn't take it that way. But if I get a review that I do feel is just a vicious attack on me or my 'supposed' (lol) skills, I will delete it. I can take constructive critisism as much as the next 'artist', but I will not tolerate flaming. I don't think I'm being nasty in stating this. If you feel I am, please forgive me. 'nuf said?
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Scene 9 ------------------------------------------- The Main Cave
* Hiei comes to a stop in front of the vine-covered cave entrance.
Hiei- Let me in, Fox!
* Almost immediately the vines part. Hiei shakes his head as he enters.
Hiei- Why do I always get stuck with Kitsunes?
* Lily twitches an ear as she looks up at him.
Lily- Just lucky, I suppose?
* Hiei grunts and goes over to where Troiyoku is making his mother comfortable.
Hiei- Are you okay, Woman?
* Sarista looks up at him as she pushes Troiyoku away.
Sarista- I'm fine! Stop pawing at me, Boy!
Troiyoku- But, Mother, you're..
Sarista- I know what I am.. Go away before I burn you, Troi!
* Hiei nods as Troiyoku hurries away.
Hiei- Hn.. I don't have to be concerned with you, then.
* Sarista scowls, but then brushes a couple strands of her hair up out of her eyes. She feels the true meaning behind the jagan-wielder's harsh words through their strengthening bond.
Sarista- Your kindness warms my heart, M'Lord.
* Hiei smirks, then turns to look over the others in the cave as Silis and Gamaru arrive. D'Tara stands to look around them frantically.
D'Tara- D'Garo?! Was he injured?! Where is my son?!
Silis- Relax, Aunt 'Tara.
Gamaru- You know he runs when he sees violence.
Troiyoku- He was behind me when I left with Mother.
* Gamaru rolls his eyes.
Gamaru- I'll go find him.
* The Hyena hybrid starts to leave.
Hiei- No. He'll return when he wakes up.
* Everyone looks at Hiei just as the glow behind his bandana disappears.
Hiei- He's passed out not too far away.
* D'Tara shakes her head.
D'Tara- Ahh, my poor, sensitive boy..
Gamaru- He'll get over that. Our new Master says he's going to start training us tomorrow.
* Almost as one, Troiyoku and all the females look toward the Koorime.
Hiei- What? These boys can't be pansies all their lives! I would think you women would want to keep them alive.
* The other females all look toward Sarista. The Alpha Female stands and moves around to face Hiei.
Sarista- So you will train them to become strong.. like you?
Hiei- Hn. I need males I can count on..
Sarista- Then you will kill them yourself when they challenge you for your place?
* Hiei looks back up at Sarista, then toward the three younger males. Silis is the only one that lowers his eyes from the Alpha's gaze.
Hiei- I told you before.. I have no intention of dying anytime soon.. I have no fear of any challenge, either.. Do any of you?
* Troiyoku looks at his brother a bit surprised when he speaks up.
Gamaru- No.. I don't.
* Hiei studies the largest of the boys, then calmly moves up closer to him, keeping Gamaru's deep red eyes.
Hiei- You'd better rest well today,.. boy.. Tomorrow will not be as pleasant for you.
* Hiei glances toward Troiyoku, then turns his back on Gamaru. He pauses a moment, then hmphs and leaves. Saarista looks up at her younger son.
Sarista- If you intend to disrespect our new Alpha I want you gone by High Sun.. Do you understand me?
* Gamaru glances toward his Mother and brother, then leaves the cave quietly.
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Not saying that Unolai's review was malicious because I didn't take it that way. But if I get a review that I do feel is just a vicious attack on me or my 'supposed' (lol) skills, I will delete it. I can take constructive critisism as much as the next 'artist', but I will not tolerate flaming. I don't think I'm being nasty in stating this. If you feel I am, please forgive me. 'nuf said?