Darkness Within the Light

Good evening.

I apologize if my last A/n was a bit...tense, KuwaL tells me I should really 'lighten up' in her opionon. I would like to thank the only person to review my story so far:

ZeldaFitz

You don't know how grateful I am for your review. To show my appreciation, I would like to not only dedicate this chapter to you; but I will answer your questions. I normally do not do this since I feel spoliers ruin the creativitiy of a story and ruins one's interest in it as well.

I am sure KuwaL is happy to hear that you had enjoyed her original version of this story. I am also happy that you are also enjoying my remake. I do have trouble with my verb tenses, even back in school. I appreciate the constructive critisim and I will make more of an effort to catch these verbal mistakes dealing with the present and past tense. To answer the question: "Are you continuing past the point KuwaL left off?"

Yes and no. I am doing a bit more; having that original 'ending' chapter altered and lead to a more darker and...sadistic road. A warning for you is this will become a long story, especially how I have it laid out. I hope you will still find it enjoyable and continue to read and of course review.

SinkingIntoDarkness.

Disclamier: I do not nor will I ever own Yu Yu Hakusho. I am not making any profit from this story nor from using this show in this story.


DEDICATED TO:

ZeldaFitz

Thank you for being my first reviewer.

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Part 4

Kuwabara stared up at the ceiling and sighed. He took out the fake ear ring. Kuwabara was really going to get one, but chickened out at the last second. That had earned him a huge headache. Kuwabara set the clip-on on the table and lay back down.

His hand found its way to his once orange curls, now blue-ish green hair. He stared at the strand that was between his thumb and forefinger. Kuwabara really didn’t want to color his hair. It was an accident really. All he really wanted was for them to notice him, so he was going to dye his hair blonde or something. He figured if it didn’t work out, he would at least see what he would have been as a blonde.

After he followed the instructions, he found out that you’re not supposed to actually try and bleach your hair blonde if you have natural orange hair. He still didn’t know who would make a warning that said: Do Not Try on Naturally Orange Hair in size 2 font on the bottom of the box. He still didn’t understand how it turned blue with green streaks.

The only thing Kuwabara really did was buy all black cloths that he bought at a gothic store. Who knew there was one just a few blocks from his house? He sure didn’t know until he walked by it and saw a cool Metallica shirt in the window.

Kuwabara closed his eyes.

‘What’s wrong with me? Why do I feel like this?’ his head felt like it was going to explode if he kept thinking about it.

“And what’s with this fucking headache?!” he shouted.

Kuwabara got out of his bed and went to the bathroom. He dug through the medicine cabinet and gulped down two Advils, dry. He didn’t want to go to the kitchen. He really didn’t want to face his sister, especially after what he did to her wrist. He still couldn’t believe he had did that to her. He covered his face with his hands and bend down towards the faucet, which was still running.

He didn’t know what he’d say to her. He really didn’t know what was going on with him, and it scared him.

Kuwabara splashed water into his face and looked at him self in the mirror.

“What the hell is wrong with you Kazuma?” he asked himself out loud.

He looked at his reflection, hoping he might get some kind of clue to why he did this.

Kuwabara sighed.

“This is pointless. I need some more air.”

Kuwabara walked out of the bathroom and to the door.

“Kazuma? Where are you going?! It’s Midnight.” shouts Shizuru from the kitchen.

“For some air!” he shouts back.

Before she could answer back, he walked out, slamming the door behind him.
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