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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good, but it could use some polishing and re-formatting...
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiedi: Hey. That was awesome!!!!!!! U really dont suck.
Makayla: More.....more.....more.....more....more!!!!!!!
Hiedi: Shut-up Makayla. Who said you could talk and r&r.
Makayla: sry. :(
Makayla: More.....more.....more.....more....more!!!!!!!
Hiedi: Shut-up Makayla. Who said you could talk and r&r.
Makayla: sry. :(
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiedi: Hey. That was awesome!!!!!!! U really dont suck.
Makayla: More.....more.....more.....more....more!!!!!!!
Hiedi: Shut-up Makayla. Who said you could talk and r&r.
Makayla: sry. :(
Makayla: More.....more.....more.....more....more!!!!!!!
Hiedi: Shut-up Makayla. Who said you could talk and r&r.
Makayla: sry. :(
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Hiei and Kurama are my favorite pairing. All in all, it was a good story. Although it would have been funny if Kurama's mother had walked in.
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really good you have to make a seqeal!
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused.... didn't Hiei come home in the morning? so how could they do their business and go to sleep and it's still morning? They didn't take that long.... did they?
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September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was fun. ^_^ The description of the lemon started slow and taunting, but suddenly sped up too quickly!
^_^ but other than the speed it was fine. very nice, in fact. ;)
^_^ but other than the speed it was fine. very nice, in fact. ;)
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was great please do write a sequel
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July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! And good lemon, please please make a sequel! *^^*
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sequel please!
Save for some minor mispellings, great job!
Save for some minor mispellings, great job!