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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 13 - Inheriting

by 66Hiei08

person POHness1
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I admit that it was a strange turn of events. Not too unexpected, though, since Hiei always believed that she was scared of him and stuffs. *shrug* i wonder if the other lords will try to use her as bait, not that shes in the human world. i guess we will see...

and as usual, i want to beat Kuwabara upside the head. he proves on again that he is so narrow-minded. i have always disliked him. Yukina, i dont know what you see in him. *sigh*

well, i hope that the announcement of his new position goes well. i cant wait to see everyone's reactions. ^_^

plz continue.
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow i cried....i laughed and i got angry it was three wonderfull chapters i am truly lovin the plot twist.....i need to know how the other lords will react......and remember to make some one feel so much emotion from reading your work is a sign of a great writer.
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nooooo poor staci she is so confused and hiei is sad he is losing her to i can't wait to see what happens next?.....great two chappies.
schedule January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow who is it that he has to kill please not yusuke or kurama but isn't yusuke quest class like hiei and if so that would leave kurama.....noooooooooo........so i wonder if sylk will just give up the kids and walk away from hiei......and i can't wait for yusuke, kurama, and yomi's reaction to the news that hiei is now lord hiei...great job.
person POHness1
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i have no problem with Mukuro ending in an honorable death. i found her to be an interesting character as well. the fact that she likes Hiei as much as i do makes her a kool person in my book. ^_^

and so, Hiei gains more power. this is lovely. i wonder will his Jagan be able to hold back all of this new power. and wait... if Hiei has now taken control of Mukuro's lands, then that gives Yusuke a reason to here from him again. they would want to know of the shift in power. yay!

do not worry about me ever leaving. this series is too interesting to let go of.

plz continue. ^_^
person Cherokee
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fate is so messing with poor Hiei.
person POHness1
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hm... interesting beginning to another installment of this lovely story. poor Mukuro, shes gonna die, isnt she? if so, - and since this is called 'inheriting' - i am gonna assume that she wants Hiei to take her place... which would mean that Hiei would rule both her land and the Barren Lands...

wow! thats a lot of land. i am gonna assume, though, that he still wont accept the title. still, i wonder what will happen. this is getting really amusing. before you know it, Hiei will rule the entirety of Demon World. lol

lovely beginning plz continue. ^_^
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great begining so Mukuro is about to die and hiei is going to get it all huh well i wonder how he will take that and who will he have to cut down to keep it i wonder how yomi will take this news....oh and by the way what's up with yusuke and kurama and will they find out about there hiers...and is shishi and touya doing okay being preggers. but like i said Great Start to the next installment.