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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 13 - Inheriting

by 66Hiei08

person POHness1
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* whats the chances that we will ever see her again? its kinda sad. i disliked her, but not enough to want her to die. the world is cruel sometimes, is it not?

oh well. she left the babies, which is good as far as they go. Eboni probably wont be happy. *shrug*

plz continue. ^_^
schedule January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow she's gone she really left....she was not my fav person but i didn't want to see her die....but she is tough and i am sure that won't be the last that we see of her....i got a question when is shishi and touya give brith.....great job.
person geeclock
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah-ha, I finally caught up with you! I love your series. No matter how long it goes on it doesn't ever get old or feel redundant. I know long stories can be nerve racking at times, ya know "Should I do this or that?" and, "The story would be brillant I do this, but will my reads like it?" Your plot decidions are so bold and risky, and I admire that. I can't wait to see what curveballs you throw at our favorite Koorime mext. I hope Kurama and Yusuke appear sometime soon.
person POHness1
schedule January 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES! thank you Eboni for finally telling your mother what you feel! I knew that you were most likely staying with Hiei, but I was a bit worried about how attached you are to your mother. Power to you, girl! WOOHOO!!

And i thought Hiei said that is Sylk left, he would be keeping the kids...hm... that could have just been me misreading. and yeah, where would she have to go?

i am so overjoyed. I like Eboni, and its nice to know that shes staying. so, does that mean that all the births are done, or are there still some that are left? i cant wait to read what happens next! yay! ^_^

plz continue. ^_^
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just meant that the site is difficult to read as in, counting all of Hiei's kids, and how many in Hiei's pack are still pregnant. Cause it lists everyone that's pregnant, including ones that are dead and infants that are also dead.
Yep a filler. Great story though! I shall read it till the end.
person POHness1
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ah yes, the lovely pitter-patter of half kitsune kits. its such a lovely time now. ^_^
i guess that, now that they have had their babies, he will be moving the main pack to the new place? or will the announcement of a new Demon Lord come first? we shall see...

plz continue. ^_^

and no, im not having any problems viewing the screen.
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still reading the story. I check everyday on my phone! ^^ I was wondering, why doesn't hiei have any special kids? All of his are health, for someone born sterile, he's gotten lucky xD Can you update this stories site? It's a bit messy, and I cant tell just how many kids Hiei has now including the ones he's taking care of... The number is getting up there lol
person POHness1
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

ah yes, such drama. such lovely, anguish-filled, action-packed drama. i just love to hear about how theye all are doing. and i can understand koenma's worries. he just needs to realize that hiei is a good person inside. everything will go fine... ... i hope. hehe

plz continue. and have a lovely day! ^_^
schedule January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
i hope that it is a wonderful one for you....4 glorious chapters wow to give us such a gift on your brithday was truly a treat.....hiei is a really good guy at heart and they will all see that soon enough...Excellent Job....HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah tachi is about to have her babies and three to boot.......wow....wonder what they'll look like i can't wait....love the two chaps....great job