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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was freakin awesome.....i love hiei's dragon......yeah hiei......great job
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahh, yes. that was quite lovely. lol. i just love the interaction between Hiei and Minoro. good stuffs. ^_^
and yes, the deal with River did clear up some things, thank you. That will be an interesting predicament when he gets to it.
well, i guess the only thing left - for the moment anyway. i remember you saying its not even close to being done - is the battle with Ooshama. hm... i wonder if he will put up a fight. i hope so, but not too much. Hiei better win. he has too much riding on this. then afterward, we will see how he manages the entire region. that will be interesting. ^_^
plz continue. ^_^
and yes, the deal with River did clear up some things, thank you. That will be an interesting predicament when he gets to it.
well, i guess the only thing left - for the moment anyway. i remember you saying its not even close to being done - is the battle with Ooshama. hm... i wonder if he will put up a fight. i hope so, but not too much. Hiei better win. he has too much riding on this. then afterward, we will see how he manages the entire region. that will be interesting. ^_^
plz continue. ^_^
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is hiei going to break out his dragon of the darkness flame on this A$$ that would be totally cool......great 2 chapters i finished the capurted saga yesterday i loved it and the last scene with all three was so hot.....i am starting on shura's quest and i am lovin it so far you are one talented writer....keep up the great work
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wait... you mean he's almost done with conquering the region? ...i take it that wont be the end of it, though. maintaining that big of a pack would be some work too. hm...interesting. and i hope that Ooshama isnt that big of a deal.
i enjoyed these chapters. i wonder how the meeting with the two new groups will go.
plz continue. ^_^
i enjoyed these chapters. i wonder how the meeting with the two new groups will go.
plz continue. ^_^
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Storie is great please update.
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December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhh, so the first of Yusuke's children is born. i wonder what Hiei plans to do with them. and i can just see the baby now, putting up a fight. i wonder what their reaction will be to Hiei when they get more active. that will be interesting.
also, i wonder how long it will take one of the others to ignore orders and go searching for Hiei again. just because he told them that he doesnt want to be found, doesnt mean that they wont go looking. which brings up another thought - will Yusuke and Kurama be able to sense energy similar to their own coming from that region? can they sense their expectant expectant children? just a thought.
i understand your position on the River and the other marked younglings. i agree, tho i do find it cute taht she wanted a kiss. hehe. it was one of those 'aaawwwwwww! ^_^' moments.
plz continue. ^_^
also, i wonder how long it will take one of the others to ignore orders and go searching for Hiei again. just because he told them that he doesnt want to be found, doesnt mean that they wont go looking. which brings up another thought - will Yusuke and Kurama be able to sense energy similar to their own coming from that region? can they sense their expectant expectant children? just a thought.
i understand your position on the River and the other marked younglings. i agree, tho i do find it cute taht she wanted a kiss. hehe. it was one of those 'aaawwwwwww! ^_^' moments.
plz continue. ^_^
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December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so bad a$$ of hiei to step up and take out those a$$e$ i have been reading Captured and have started Aftermath i think i am on chapter 30 Damn they are so frickin Great.....i just can't stop reading.....you have major talent....keep up the great work.
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
we all knew that Sylk would cause she trouble, and here she is! man, i tell you what. i hope she calms down a bit and realizes that staying by hiei - even is half-grudgingly - is a good idea. she doesnt have to like it, she just has to do it.
and why do i feel like the fact that Ooshama like males will come back and haunt us? hiei better watch out. im positive that he can win, but Ooshama might put up a fight.
and im lovin all of these new kids. lol. hiei needs to come to terms, though, with the fact that he marked his daughter as his MATE. i wonder how long that will take...
plz continue! ^_^
and why do i feel like the fact that Ooshama like males will come back and haunt us? hiei better watch out. im positive that he can win, but Ooshama might put up a fight.
and im lovin all of these new kids. lol. hiei needs to come to terms, though, with the fact that he marked his daughter as his MATE. i wonder how long that will take...
plz continue! ^_^
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HEY SORRY I HAVE BEEN SO BUSY LATELY THAT I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO REVIEW LIKE NORMAL PLEASE FORGIVE ME! LOVE THE CHAPTERS I WONDER HOW HIEI IS GOING TO TAKE OUT THE OTHER ALPHA....AND THANXZ FOR CLEARING UP WHY THE MARE WAS NOT MARKED YET......GREAT JOB AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i get back reading and find that you not only finished your last installment but that you started a new one......wo so much to read.....i wonder how he will take down this next alpha and how will minoro fell when finds out that his alpha was mounted by someone else.....and hiei won't get preggers right because he has to be in heat for that i think am i right......great job