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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 10 - Initiating

by 66Hiei08

schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well... if I was a writer I'd have many stories of my own to write and not enjoy so much reading. Don't let the fact that I rarely login to review your wonderful story lines keep you from writing or heading in the direction that your muse takes you. It's been numerous chapters since I last drop you a line to pat you on the back and thank you for keeping me entertained. As to why the latest girl is fake signature I'm guessing it has something to do with her being a fire demon rather than a water demon if the color of her hair has anything to do with it.
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are so gonna make me cry if there is something wrong with troiyoku he is may fav. out of all the guys i mean no disrespect to hiei but i can't get enough of him he is just to cute for words.....so please let him be okay.....and river is so sweet calling hiei papa aaaawwwww.......and don't worry i will be here untill that awful day when you say that the saga is over.....great job and i am so happy just please don't hurt troiyoku:D
person POHness1
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is getting interesting! ^_^ i'm glad that hiei has had little trouble accepting his children. and i wonder what will go on with the alphas in the area. hm... choices... is there no other way to deal with the female alpha???

the world is cruel, is it not? *sigh* oh well.

plz continue. ^_^
person cahepyp
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*is still along for the ride* No need to worry about not having a fan base, lots of people read like me, silently.

Looks like things'll really be heating up soon, I can't wait for the action.

Btw, are you dropping Shura's Quest? Been waiting on that one for a few months.

Tag you again next time I have something to say, but I'll be around and reading. Keep up the great chapters, I love how quickly you update. ^_^
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry for not reviewing been to busy with school.....anyway love these 2 chapters as all ways...wow hiei doesn't want the conflict so he has decide not to be ultamite alpha wow that a real twist there....can't wait for more.
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aaawwww the kids are so cute...and all hiei i can just imagine hiei just like his boys when he was little....another 2 great chapters although i really want to know who she is dating outside the barrier....until next review...again thanxz for sharing
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THAT IS TE SWEETEST CHAPTER EVER AND I THINK YOUR RIGHT HIEI IS ACTING JUST FINE.....GREAT CHAPTER
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No I don't think your making Hiei to OOC, I think in a situation like this he wouldn't have a lot of choice but to change a little.
Especially with his mates, they are all quite affectionate when they arn't tip toeing around his moods. So Keep up the good work.
So now that Hiei is going to be looking for a salution for Lily, does that mean he will finally go see Kurama?
Hey, a girl can hope. Also I would love to know how Stacy is doing, once her morning sickness is over it would be so funny is she turned a little clingy. Give Hiei another new experiance LOL.
Anyway, I'll stop blabing now.
Legilmyth
person POHness1
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
all the cute little babies! hehe ^_^ im glad everyone seems to be doing well, tho im not happy that lily keeps losing all her children. i wonder why? hmmm... well, anyway, im liking the beginning.

plz continue. ^_^
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay a new installment and so many cute little ones....poor lily though.....but hiei will cheer her up......glad to see your next installment so soon and with 2 great chapters......oh and gam and troyo are just to cute for there own good.