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Are we litteraly going to be seeing cat fights? LOL just kidding. Good work. Poor Hiei, just when he finaly decides to commit to a more relaxed domestic life, he gets a bunch of new allies and headaches. Anyway keep up the good work.
Legilmyth

hehe. wow, things are getting endlessly interesting. one day hiei will accept his place, and i guess it will happen in the next installment. ^_^

plz continue.

Thanks for updating so much! I'm still here! Actually I love that you've been posting a chapter every day (2 is even better!).
During my long and boring lunch hour, I usually see that this story was updated, and it's something to read on my phone and make the time go by! (Not the most appropriate story to read at work, but they can't see my phone lol)
I can't review on my phone so I'll say it again. Thanks for updating so much!

I love it! This is going to be so much fun!
And don't worry about long chapters, I love them.
Keep up the great work.
Legilmyth

wow more great chapters....man i love reading your stories.....i can't wait to see how yusuke and kurama react to he females.....and how will sarista take it.....sorry for not updating regularly but i am down with a serious virus thats got me in bed and feeling really bad......so to you i say stay healthy and keep putting out masterpieces like this......i'll try to update more when i can GREAT WORK.

*shakes head and laughs* well, thats a nice change, isnt it? i would have never thought that she and her pack would have been caught by Matsua. it must have been an underhanded method, seeing as she is portrayed as being so strong. i would be pissed off too. but i got to tell you, this is just great. im assuming hiei will somehow assume responsibility for them, or will they stay with Dagon forever? hehe. i bet he's gonna call on koenma and get him to tell kurama and yusuke. i cant wait to see the looks on their faces. ^_^

speaking of yusuke and kurama, i wonder how they are doing? i have said so before, and i will say so again - i wish there was a way that they could be together. *sigh* hehe. well, this may do it.

plz continue. ^_^

Ohh! Love the twist! THis is going to be hularious.
And Hiei has yet another delema to work out. LOL.
As always, I look forward to more.
Legilmyth

wow i am lagging 4 new chapters to read......yayayayayaya i am so glad nothing bad happened to troyo......so he had the babies wow......i am wondering if on of those is not really hiei's i have seen it happen before in other fic's and was wondering if you adapted that kind of scene....if not what's the big secert is she a reincarnation of someone....what? what? what?.....any way well that rat took the boy or the mom ran off didn't really understand that part but maybe i read it while under the influence of pain killers....hurt my shoulder pretty bad....any way so that basterd's mat. has got preggy females by yusuke and kurama he has got to be lying that just can't be true it has got to be some sort of trick.....unless he collected there sperm like some kind of twisted sperm bank because i don't remember them sleeping with any females while captured......and damn who is there that mat's got.....who is this female is it the female alpha they were talikng about before or maybe kuma's daughter. well update again soon....thanxz again and GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Story is okay but whats ging on with the others expechely Yuskae does he ever find happness. p .s sorry for the spelling.

how in the world did he manage to get females pregnant by kurama and yusuke?! i dont remember this! *sigh* o well. i just hope that Matsua dies a horrible death. he deserves every little bit of it.

and whether hiei wants to or not, he has already thought of the territory as his own. he will claim it in due time. i just wish there was a decent way to take care of the female alpha... hm... of course, the rumor that shes famale could be a lie, and instead she is a male sub like hiei.

hehe. dont mind me. im just clutching at straws. ^_^

plz continue. ^_^