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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 9 - Heating Up

by 66Hiei08

schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWWW! that was so super sweet at the end...to bad they could not be together.more please
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Refrain from Billy Idol
"Because in the midnight hour, she cried more, more, more
With a rebel yell, she cried more, more, more
In the midnight hour, babe, more, more, more
With a rebel yell, more, more, more"

Sorry your not feel too well but please do continue to write and post when you can.
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So cute. An talk about a fun way to improve ones stamina LOL.
Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see what you have in store for Kurama and Yusuke as well.
Legilmyth
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i been waiting on you....omg kurama gets his sight back just so that's the frist thing he sees...damn what is he gooing to do to suzuka
person POHness1
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pregnant by another, huh/ *sigh* like Kurama really needed that now. oh well, wats done is done.
and in other news, im glad that hiei has accepted his role of potential alpha of the whole valley. thing will get so much more interesting now. ^_^

plz continue.
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yeah i'm still here......i'm not going anywhere......it's kind of sad yet romantic the way those two had to die.....another great chapter
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was well done. Isn't Kurama and the others in for a surprise. LOL
And all because of our beloved Hiei. ANyway, keep up the good work.
Legilmyth
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm lovin the story so far and understanding more and more about hiei thanxz for sharing......i can't review like i would like anymore because i started school today... but i will review when i can keep up the great work.
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow 3 yummy chapters...i needed those....starting to understand hiei better know....and the things he does.....please update soon thanxz
person POHness1
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww, its kinda sad that Minoro can only get a certain amount of pleasure from their encounter. *sigh* the cruelties. still, it would be better for Minoro to do it than the others. can you imagine hiei getting knocked up at the same time as his mates?

... ur not secretly planning that are you? hmmm? ~_^

anyway, i love the story. this will be an interesting installment of the series - i can tell already. plz continue ^_^