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for Hiei's Harem - Pt. 9 - Heating Up

by 66Hiei08

schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!!!! I liked Klarice.... Now I'm all sad that she died... ><

But, this is still great!!! Keep it up!
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
what a fitting name for a child of hiei's.....great end.....can't wait for the next installment i know it will be just as great if not better than the others.....will b reading you soon.
person POHness1
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww, that was such a cuuute ending. ^_^ im happy for hiei. i cant wait to read the next installment. this story just keeps getting better and better.

plz continue. ^_^
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so sad.....poor hiei.....it was sweet how hab went to comfort him.....thanxz for the honer of becoming one of you characters.....believe me i will wait....i dread the day when you say this is the end of the series...so long as there is another installment i am happy great 2 chapters.
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg you made me cry.......poor hiei and the baby aaawwww.....well as far as the name goes i am female but i always thought that the name sounded more male since it is a creation of two of my fav. bishi's itahci " Tachi" and sesshomaru "Maru" so Tachimaru....but i liked it so i kept it......as long as there cute i don't care....jk..lol...another great chapter
person POHness1
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... so klarice dies...thats kinda sad...and hiei's first kid too... he probably wont take this very well. *sigh* the world can be so cruel sometimes.

plz continue.
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i have all kinds of chapter to catch up on and then you want to you my name sure i would love that and i know it's not against the rules so go ahead i think of it as a brithday present thanxz that would be so cool.
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho! NOw things are getting really interesting. Poor stuborn Hiei, he always goes to exremes doesn't he?
Any way, still loving it. Keep up the good work.
Legilmyth
person POHness1
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey. i know that i have not reviewed in a while, but i wanted to let you know that i have still been reading, and i enjoy where this story is heading. i will be rooting for hiei as he takes on the territory. ^_^

plz continue.
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done