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wow i must admit nice story so far and i hope you continue to update

Good chapter. Don't worry about the lemon. Start slow (not too graphic) and work your way up. It will be easier and come off more natural that way. As to the nick names, you'd have to go back to the beginning of fanfiction to figure that one out. Every now and then you'll read an original one, but I don't think anyone lays sole claim to any of them.

Hiei and kurama like each other and nether will say it; it's a pretty classic recipe. I can't wait to see what secret spices you deside to throw in there. KEEP WRITING! You have a few grammar problems-- but who doesn't? Tip on word processeing: Most spell-checker's have a grammar check too, but you may have to turn it on. It won't catch everything, but it helps. Keep writing and don't fret over the page count.

I didn't look to see if this had any other reviews yet, so even if I'm first, that means you're committed to write more. You promised, I have it in writing. :)

Good start. I'm looking forward to more. Update soon.