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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Hiei, LOL. Okay not really. but goodness I must say you are so good ant torturing him. (I do the same hting to all my Fav characters) BUt keep up the good work. I just can't wait to see what happens when Kurama and Yusuke discover tha Hiei has a whole town. LOL oh the looks on their faces will be pricless.
Legilmyth
Legilmyth
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
looks like hiei is in rouble now although some of the powers that the brothers have would benifit hiei's pack so it could work....i just wait and see what happens........."i'm lovin' it"
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 4!
oh i'm so sorry u lost a close family member! i sure hope u dont lose any more family members! i would be devastated if i lost a close family member! i hope u get better! well anyways getting off that sad topic i really enjoyed that chapter! it must have been hard to make it with a family members death in ur mind and heart! WELL GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! PLEASE TRY TO GET BETTER! THIS IS SUCH A FANTASTIC STORY! I TOTALLY CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! TAKE UR TIME IN MAKING THE NEXT CHAPTER! I WOULD ENJOY A NEW CHAPTER THOUGH!
oh i'm so sorry u lost a close family member! i sure hope u dont lose any more family members! i would be devastated if i lost a close family member! i hope u get better! well anyways getting off that sad topic i really enjoyed that chapter! it must have been hard to make it with a family members death in ur mind and heart! WELL GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! PLEASE TRY TO GET BETTER! THIS IS SUCH A FANTASTIC STORY! I TOTALLY CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! TAKE UR TIME IN MAKING THE NEXT CHAPTER! I WOULD ENJOY A NEW CHAPTER THOUGH!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL Poor Hiei, so many troubles popping up for our favorite apparition.
Keep up the good work.
Legilmyth
Keep up the good work.
Legilmyth
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 1!
hm interesting! a cat demon huh! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! ITS SO BLOODY FANTASTIC!
hm interesting! a cat demon huh! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! ITS SO BLOODY FANTASTIC!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh dang! that is just plain evil of ya!!!
well at least he has more....to get off to!!! MUAHHAHAHAHHAAHAH *evil cackle heard through out the 'verse*
*ahem*
N-E-ways......how you holding up? dealing with greif is not easy. just think of all the good things in life and KEEP thinking POSSITIVE!! and ALWAYS move FORWARD!!!
so, i hope you are doing ok.
laters!
miko ~_^
well at least he has more....to get off to!!! MUAHHAHAHAHHAAHAH *evil cackle heard through out the 'verse*
*ahem*
N-E-ways......how you holding up? dealing with greif is not easy. just think of all the good things in life and KEEP thinking POSSITIVE!! and ALWAYS move FORWARD!!!
so, i hope you are doing ok.
laters!
miko ~_^
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 3!
hm interesting! hiei always seem to be getting in all kinds of shit doesn't he!haha! it seem he will have a bigger pack soon! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT AND THIS STORY! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE OF UR FANTASTIC CHAPTERS! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please??? *puppy eyes!*) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE!
hm interesting! hiei always seem to be getting in all kinds of shit doesn't he!haha! it seem he will have a bigger pack soon! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT AND THIS STORY! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE OF UR FANTASTIC CHAPTERS! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please??? *puppy eyes!*) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE!
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn if this continues Hiei is going to rule the entire region. Not that that is an entirely bad thing^_^ So sorry about not reviewing earlier but my connection died on me for nearly a month and a half,it has been terrible. But luckily I had your fantastic story too look forward to, and I've now read through part 2-6 and as usually it has been great^_^ And so many chapters in such a short time? You rock girl^_^ So please continue this fantastic story^_^
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness. this is just getting better and better. hehe. i am seriously enjoying this. its too much fun watching Hiei squirm (sort of) under the weight of his position. i cant wait to see how he tries to rectify the situation. ^_^
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I bet Hiei is wishing he hadn't left the fortress the day they went on patrol.