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for Hiei's Harem: Pt. 6 - Expanding

by 66Hiei08

person tigerlilly193
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAP 13!
i really dont have anything to say about this chapter! sorry! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! ITS SO BLOODY FANTASTIC! great job!
person tigerlilly193
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 14!
hm wheres the fox! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I TOTALLY CANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! (pwrtty pwetty pwetty please with an icecream sundae on top???) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN USPENCE LONG!
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how long Yusuke will last. I don't envy him, raging hormones, no outlet and Kurama has an entire pack to choose from~_^ But they are getting closer to Hiei, I'm really looking forward to that confrontation^_^
person mls1971
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
person tigerlilly193
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
chap 12!
poor hiei! he doesn't seem to know whats he's done! WOW! GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE IT! THIS STORY IS SO BLOODY AMAZING! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE AMAZING CHAPTERS! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please with an icecream sundae on top???) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!
person POHness1
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sigh*
for bloody's sake, have faith in hiei! he is your damn alpha!
and hiei, you better keep sane or i will leap into the story and kick your sorry ass!
*clears throat*
i really enjoyed this chapter. plz continue ^_^
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the last to chapters hiei claims minoro and opens up to him some and it seems yusuke is in trouble i mean almost raping koemna wel not realy becuase you can't rape the willing or at least that's what they say......please continue i love your stories.
person mls1971
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update again soon!!!!!!
person tigerlilly193
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
CHAP 10!
hm interesting! poor minoro! i feel sorry for him! at least hiei is helping with his insecurities! GREAT CHAPTER I LOVE IT! ITS SO BLOODY FANTASTIC! I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IN THIS FANTASTIC STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U ON MY HANDS AND KNEES TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS SOON! (pwetty pwetty pwetty please with a chery on top???) I'LL BE WAITING VERY VERY VERY LONGINGLY! PLEASE DONT KEEP ME IN SUSPENCE LONG!
person mls1971
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!