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ainnn that was too much for me >.<

damn it, Karasu, for breaking Suichi in that awful way

That was GREAT! I love your writing! I hope Suichi finally reaches a full recovery, it would be sad if he didn't. Please don't stop writing, you'll be a great author some day! You need to write another, you can't stop it there, that would be sad and I would cry. More is needed....please.

I can't wait to read more!!!!!!

Two chapter bonus! There seems to be a light at the end of the tunnel yet I fear it isn't over for the 3
just yet.I can't wait for the next chapter and hope its soon

All I can say to this so far(chapter 9) is "wow" and I can't wait to see what else happens.Poor Youko have to watch what he has caused and poor red not knowing witch way is up right now.Boy is the crow going to get it(I hope)And than theres the bat having to watch all this and still know he can only be a friend.A good one hopefully but a friend non the less.You've got me on the edge of my seat waiting for the update and I hope it isn't a long wait.

I re-read it again and it still had the same effect on me as it did the first time I read it. I swear I'm in love with your writing. And I want to read more. Please don't be crul to me and just stop writing. You could be a great author if you wanted to be. I can tell by how well you are at describing everything in the story. Everytime I read a book I get attached to atleast one character and get the sensation that I feel everything they feel. Your skill at writing got me attached to damn near all the main characters, I was attached to Karasu, Yoko, Suichi, and Kuro.. it takes skill to get someone attached to that many characters. Please write more.

I can't tell you how glad I am that you made a sequel for this. And I certainly don't mind the darker aspects of it, Karasu/Kurama is one of my favourite pairings and you're writing it hard and dirty and delicious. The torture scenes were crazy and that Karasu/Shuuichi lemon had things in it I haven't yet seen in fanfiction. Nice job. I'm dying to see more, especially how broken Shuuichi will be by the time Youko gets to him. Karasu has a way about him that won't let Shuuichi go so easily.

MORE!

I read the prequel. Once I read there was sequel I rushed to read this.
This story had my eyes GLUED to screen literally. The details make all the scenes play in my head like a movie. I'm weak for guys getting
tortured and I enjoy their emotional turmoil. >3 I'm sadistic like that to my OCs.


Keep up the good work!