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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dude! definitely write some more. I´m so hooked up to this story already from the first chapter. I loved the way you described the band´s performance and the emotional swirls between the two-yay! gambatte yo!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this story! Please update soon : )
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!! It's good writting and a great plot. Very descriptive. I can't wait for more. Oh, and a wet dream, followed with a chaser of druken lemon sounds -perfect-. That's just me. Can't wait for more.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You definitely managed to show the emotion in this chapter! Oh my God! It was so amazing! I promise I've ruined my eyes from trying to get into the computer, I was sitting so close. This was simply amazing! There was like an overflow of emotions between the two of them and you portrayed it more than perfectly. Really, you did a wonderful job!
Also, your little ideas for the next couple of chapters; I LIKE THEM! ^_^
Also, your little ideas for the next couple of chapters; I LIKE THEM! ^_^
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear G*d! Lol, here I am back for the first time in months to see what's going on around these parts, I click on the first updated story I see and my G*d! ^^ Please update before I burst!!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, even if you say that it was written in a rush!
I wish that the bargain works and KyoHana updates soon, I like this story very much, even if all of the guys are humans (I just love demons, but oh well!)
Please update soon, and Kurama in a wet dream, sound delicious!
I wish that the bargain works and KyoHana updates soon, I like this story very much, even if all of the guys are humans (I just love demons, but oh well!)
Please update soon, and Kurama in a wet dream, sound delicious!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! It looks like ur a fast updater. Always a good thing. And nope, Im not dissapointed in the slightiest! Its very well written. Im getting into now.... Hummm.... It didnt hit me to see if u had other stories..... ((yes im slow lol))..... I think i need to go check out ur other stories now...... ((runs off to search for more stories))
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^&^*%(&)&*&%*&Y)(**)^(^)*(_&^E@%^%*(&(*(+ %$%&$*^(&)(!
Yeah, that's what that chapter did to me...Where do I begin? I checked out the video and the bois were very yummy. But really, this story is made of love and win. During the performance you conveyed Hiei and Kurama's emotions and the forming bond between them very well. I also love how you describe our boys' appearances. Hiei only being able to open himself while onstage is heart-wrenching to me, and the fact that you paired up Kuronue and Karasu makes me squeal very loudly.
And I'm babbling...because I love this story...I even pimped you in my LiveJournal...and you should come over to LJ, there's a bunch of us YYH authors over there...
You know I need to see more of this, right? And I'm up for anything filthy in the next chapter, whatever you're doing, you're doing it right!
Yeah, that's what that chapter did to me...Where do I begin? I checked out the video and the bois were very yummy. But really, this story is made of love and win. During the performance you conveyed Hiei and Kurama's emotions and the forming bond between them very well. I also love how you describe our boys' appearances. Hiei only being able to open himself while onstage is heart-wrenching to me, and the fact that you paired up Kuronue and Karasu makes me squeal very loudly.
And I'm babbling...because I love this story...I even pimped you in my LiveJournal...and you should come over to LJ, there's a bunch of us YYH authors over there...
You know I need to see more of this, right? And I'm up for anything filthy in the next chapter, whatever you're doing, you're doing it right!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so hooked on this story. I can't wait to see how you write the chemistry between Kurama and Hiei. I'm going to have to follow the Youtube link.
As for the lemon, you could always do both...I would like to see some Hiei/Kurama and I would like to see some Karasu and Kuronue interaction, NC-17 rated or not.
As for the lemon, you could always do both...I would like to see some Hiei/Kurama and I would like to see some Karasu and Kuronue interaction, NC-17 rated or not.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And KyoHana will take this lovely, lovely bait. I promise, I will be working on the next chapter of 'What Price, Love?' I know, at least, how it begins, but from there... well... it may take me a little while, but for you (and this beautiful story), I'll do it.
the erotic sway of a single candle flame, powerful enough to destroy, but beautiful enough to captivate.
This one phrase is, for me, the VERY essence of not only Hiei is, but of the love that will eventually be for the two of them. I have NEVER, EVER read ANYthing so PURE before tonight!
BRAVA!!
the erotic sway of a single candle flame, powerful enough to destroy, but beautiful enough to captivate.
This one phrase is, for me, the VERY essence of not only Hiei is, but of the love that will eventually be for the two of them. I have NEVER, EVER read ANYthing so PURE before tonight!
BRAVA!!