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Damn girl! You updated two chapters so fast that I didn't have a chance to review them individually.

First off, I want to say that this story is fully responsible for my obsession with Dir En Grey. Not only is Akuro no Oka one of my favourite songs now, I even went and got my haircut like Kyo's in that video because his hairstyle was so kick-ass. They're fucking awesome!

*cough* Anyway, back to the story. That dream-scene where Hiei comes to Kurama was dripping hot. You're painting some great chemistry between them and I love reading every line. I also loved Hiei whispering the wors into Kurama's neck as they were playing. Kurama's a trooper, I would have passed out and/or dropped the guitar.

And Kurama with the green pillow and the green robe. That's so cute.

The Karasu/Kuronue scene was mad hot. Needy Kuronues are sexay. I do have to make one point though - if Karasu and Kuronue are in that level of a D/S relationship, then Karasu would have never let Kuronue bring Yusuke to his apartment in the first place, since Yusuke was drunk and has a history of switching teams when he's drunk. Karasu would have told Kuronue to go home and helped Yusuke himself. But that's a minor issue and I don't want it to seem like I'm bashing your TOTALLY FUCKING AWESOME STORY in any way.

More, write more!

SQUEE!!! enough said ^_~

Can't wait for chapter 5!!!! Whooo! I love you!

This is just so poignant -- the way Hiei and Kurama are connecting through their music. Beautifully written, m'dear!

And though the muse is currently fixated on the next chapter of 'Eye of the Beholder', I promise that I will try my best to begin the next installment of 'What Price, Love' for you. Okay?!?! :)

OH my GOD!!!! O.O Thank the gods or the devils in HELL that you are continuing this story!!! I was so excited that you posted another chapter I nearly fell out of my seat. First off I have five words for you.

YOU ARE A FUCKING GOD!!!!

That may seem a little creepy to you, but I speak words that ring true! The third chapter was .....MMmmmmmm no words can discribe my ....LOVE for this delicious little smex scene. And Karasu ....TO DIE FOR! You make all of them sound so....devilishly HOT!

I can not wait for the next chapter when Kurama sees Hiei after his 'message' in the bands performance. I am so excited I could just....spit!

Okay, I'll leave you to your writings. Great WORK!! =^.^=

Popping in here to say 'hello' and let you know I'm still a huge fan of this fic^^ I'm very glad you updated. I'm loving what you're doing with Kurama and Hiei. Also, I'm very Kurama x Hiei centric so my opinion is of course going to be that the the focus on Karasu, Yusuke, and Kuronue was a bit much in the last chapter ;) But, since you are asking on a serious note, I'm not sure I really like the turn you took with Yusuke's character BUT I can believe it in the context of the story AND I follow what and why you did what you did with Karasu and Kuronue. Since both were secondary characters in the show and this is an AU fic I can't really comment so much on in or out of character. The whole bit makes sense, but I'm with you in that I'm not sure how comfortable I was with it. However, it all comes down to how well it carries over in the next chapter. As long as you are going to address all of what you've put into motion (and it sounds very much like you are) than I say 'full speed ahead!' Luck to you for the next chapter, I can't wait to read it.

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Don't sell yourself short, m'lady, this chapter was fantastic. The dom/sub lemon between Karasu and Kuronue was not only fucking brilliant; but it was erotic and very beautiful to someone who has little to no experiencw with this sort of relationship. I also loved seeing Karasu so caring because usually I just think of him as such an evil, sadistic bastard.

Oh and the Kurama/Hiei dream sequence.... OMG!!! If I still had my ovaries, I'd have lost them for sure!!

Hi, there! I just read the story and think that it's totally awesome and hope to read more soon. I am completely on your side with Hiei and Kyo being remarkably similar. When I saw Kyo on stage at their concert with in five minutes I had fallen for him because he reminded me of Hiei (a little messed up, I know)! For about a month after that my life goal was to find a way to get Kyo to cosplay as Hiei, because something about him just screams Hiei... of course I would probably end up in jail because I'd have to jump him, but it would totally be worth it!

Wonderfully done! ^_^ I so totally loved it! Oh please, pretty please write the third chapter. The way you describe Hiei and the rest of the guys....is mouth wateringly delicious! ~_^ So please hurry up and post your next chappy! ~Gives lots of goodies to ensure a quick update~

LYL: Scarlet Obsession

I loved the two chapters...
So sexy... *drools and nosebleeds*
Update soon? Pleaseeee!! =)