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hey hcollen! tis story is really getting interesting. i wonder what will happen when they got to the counselor. will hiei show up and stir up trouble? will kurama get his revenge for yusuke or will yusuke stop him? cant wait to read more.

AWESOME STORY!!!! [snif snif] so sad.T_T i love how u potray? the characters and how u take the story at good pace. poor yusuke-_- torture him MORE!! j/k kurama sooooo adorable in this story^_^! ill be a'waitin for the next chappieXD KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK!!!!!!!!!

This story is awsome, I really want to see the outcome. Please keep on writting.

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so... i got bored... and i finally came over to this section... and BAM! you have another story! actually, i like it. i like kura yusuke fics... and the plot seems very interesting. but then. it IS you. ^^ :D


now let's see if i *remember* that i'm reading this.... xD

oi! i'm no ingrate! i just get lazy from time to time with reviewing. lol. when i read the first chapter, i was totally outraged by hiei's callous behavior towards yusuke. i was seriously entertaining he image of a turning him over my knee and spank him good. and i don't mean for pleasure. i was so happy when kurama showed up when he did. i can't imagine yusuke dead. *shudders* anyway, i eagerly look foward to your next update.

I like that you're showing Yusuke's struggle, as well as Kurama's understanding in spite of his weakened state. They are so good together. For a powerful one like Yusuke, the feelings of helplessness, shame and fear of Hiei would be difficult to overcome. You're right - Hiei only respects power if it's greater than his own, so he could act that way. I still do like Hiei, just not so much in this fic. (Bad Hiei! King Enma needs to give him a spanking.) Nicely written, too. :)

i love this story when it was on your livejournel, im glad you broung it over to aff.net

hey i liked this story so far, though having hiei be the bad guy is a bit extreme for me since i like him, but u did it well enough for me to still enjoy it. poor yusuke, i hope he gets better for his and kurama's sake. oh and since i reviewed ur story how about reviewing mine, huh huh, just kidding. anyway update soon. : )

Hey! I remember reading this on your LJ. I loved it then, and I still love it now! I haven't been around aff for a while, so I didn't realize you had posted it here, too. I'm looking forward to rereading it though. I love stories that deal with real emotional issues between and within te characters. That makes them real and gives them depth. I especially love reading your stories like that because they are very believable. You draw a very full and dynamic picture of the characters and give them motivation for their actions. I eagerly await more chapters.

Great beginnning, more soon please?