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for Behind Closed Doors

by hColleen

person kit-kit
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was one of my favorite chapter because of yusuke confronting and dealing with hiei
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww. the suprise kiss at the end was so sweet. i wonder what hiei's next move is. i can't wait for the part when kurama starts plotting his revenge.
person kit-kit
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aah i loved the chapter
person ZeldaFitz
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So Hiei is still messing with Yusuke -- little twerp. I love Hiei, but... I like the way Kurama told him off. The counselor's office was done nicely, too. Nice chapter.
person YamaNeko
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope everything gets better after the next chapter. When Kurama gets to killing Hiei, Could you put in a little torture? I would love to see that.
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. i know you were teasing *gives you cookies* awwww. that was so sweet. i can't wait to see the visit to the counselor(sp?). i wonder if kurama will be in the room with him or if he will be made to sit outside. i wonder what hiei has been up to since the break up besides tormenting yusuke. anyway i look foward to the next update. ja!
person jess
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor kurama! he's so sweet and loving!!! i know that he will take super awesome care of yusuke and then they will be kissing it will be adorable and then there will be... more. ^_^ *licks lips* yum. hehe. Thank you! i really like it and can't wait for more! *HUG*
person Broken Wings
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hiei is such a jerk! This is a different story, but it is well written. I like it! Also, to make Youko so sweet, a very interesting and origional way to portray him. All in all, a damn good story. Keep writing, you have an awesome way of writing things!
Broken Wings
person Diane
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just discovered this & I really like it & hope you keep up the good work & update soon.
person kit-kit
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved this chapter