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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry. I wanted to fix my e-mail adress. I spelt lily wrong
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am sorry to do this but PLEASE UPDATE LESSONS. i really like that story, so don't be mad at me. thats all i have to say.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Oh, the action, I was wondering if there would be any soon. Thank you for the great images. I can just see Kurama resculpting Yusuke. It was beautiful.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love this chapter because of the lemon and the little heart to heart.
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bows to your genius* Your stories never disappoint! I love this story line, and you're keeping them in character very well despite the unusual circumstances. Update frequently!
-Raine
-Raine
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent as always. I can't wait for your next chapter.
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So you just had to end it there, didn't you?!
I like what you've done between Yusuke and Hiei. A fight between the three of them would not be pretty, and would most likely include a death, which no one would like.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I like what you've done between Yusuke and Hiei. A fight between the three of them would not be pretty, and would most likely include a death, which no one would like.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed until now, but I wasn't on my computer. I really like your style of writing. You are by far my favorite author on this site. Thank you for updating your stories so quickly. It makes for easier reading.
I did want to point out that in Paragraph 38, Yusuke refers to Shuichi as "Kurama" to Shiori. You made the reference later that Shiori does not know that name. Just thought you would like that information.
I did want to point out that in Paragraph 38, Yusuke refers to Shuichi as "Kurama" to Shiori. You made the reference later that Shiori does not know that name. Just thought you would like that information.