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person nytekit (not logged in)
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, i am intrigued. what's the deal with this one i wonder? it seems interesting enough. i liked the song you had for this. it really set the scene rather nicely. also, the way you described the tone changes added to the eerie night setting you created. great job! update soon! i'm wondering where it's going.
person Lady of The West
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was Beautiful. Sad, but beautiful...
person Anonymos
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kurama died? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO...*Gasp*...OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO....*GASP*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
Alright, you get the point.
this was Marvelous!
person Taicrazy
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
indeed it was sad, but wonderful!
it's very beautiful I must admitt! :)
person Lill
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO SAAAAAAAD! *Cries... ALOT! OMG!*
WHAAAAAAA! WHY KURAMA!? WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE!?
*CRIES! EVEN MORE!*

*Sniff*...Well...It was beautiful...But OH SO SAD!

Keep...*Sniff*...Up the...*Sniff*...Good work...WHAAAAAAAAAA! *Cries*