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aaaahhh that was so sweeet in a hot im gonna kick your ass sorta way. Either way i loved it.

Oh I loved this first chapter. In so many fanfics it is Kurama who is always the aggressor, but you had Hiei fill that role -- well, almost, though I am glad that he came to his senses and didn't actually abuse Kurama physically.

I have to wonder, though, if there is more to this 'friendship' than either of them realizes.... how far will they take it -- physically as well as emotionally.

Oh yeah,I hope there's going to be a chapter 2.Pleeeese,

Interesting chappie. Whew... Hiei all angry and going at Kurama like that... man lemme tell you... mad hotness. I also like how well you put the uncontrollable rage in Hiei and how well you showed it. ::Nods:: I could almost feel it myself, and I found that to be a wonderful element to bring you further into the story. Can't wait to see the next chappie!

Gr! need another chapter! must have lemony goodness. this is a great fic, over all. there isnt really anything i would complain about.

wonderful as always i just can't wait for the next chapter

Very good. And very frustrating that you left us with a cliffy right at the good part. Update soon.

GOD I LOVE YOU. You know that I've been waiting on this one! I like your take on how they got together (and I'm sure - like me - you've read it all about Hiei and Kurama and the various interpretations on their relationship). I mean, I like how Hiei was aggressive, then realizes that he was too aggressive, and Kurama is understanding and Hiei is hesitant/apologetic. I feel that alot of people portray Hiei as being very one dimensional, but your interpreation is like mine - Hiei has a great capacity for love and can be vulernable and strong at the same time. You expressed that well, and you also had them set the boundaries and deliniations in their relationship in a believeable and not-corny way.

But I tend to babble...especially about Hiei...and Hiei and Kurama. What I mean to say is: I like it...lots. I can't wait for the next chapter and I have no problem with the story being long. Yea!