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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Continue soon!!!!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1
WOW! Talk about Hiei needing to relieve his stress and anger. That was totally cool. It's so much fun when Kurama gets dominated like a sweet little fox bitch. This is getting good.
WOW! Talk about Hiei needing to relieve his stress and anger. That was totally cool. It's so much fun when Kurama gets dominated like a sweet little fox bitch. This is getting good.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are truely wicked. Please don't make us wait till the fourth chapter for the good stuff. Great chapter, update soon.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2
I love the drama and struggle Hiei is having. It really is cute how Hiei asks Kurama to be submissive so he can say thank you. It's really fun and interesting that no matter what situation Kurama finds himself into, he always manages to control the situation. He really was able to manipulate and seduce Hiei back to him so easily, not that Hiei wasn't really on to him but it's so much fun watching how it all plays out. Kurama on bottom, yay. Can't wait for the lemon.
I love the drama and struggle Hiei is having. It really is cute how Hiei asks Kurama to be submissive so he can say thank you. It's really fun and interesting that no matter what situation Kurama finds himself into, he always manages to control the situation. He really was able to manipulate and seduce Hiei back to him so easily, not that Hiei wasn't really on to him but it's so much fun watching how it all plays out. Kurama on bottom, yay. Can't wait for the lemon.
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write some of the best K/H scenes I've ever read. This fic, I'd say, is aptly titled. ^_^
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You have a very distinctive style and I see you improving with every fic you write. You also have some of the cutest smut moments between Kurama and Hiei, however brief they may be. I'm always looking forward to reading some of your work. I haven't been reading fanfics lately, not as much as I would like to. I'm reviewing as soon as I got a chance to.
This fic hasn't disappointed me, either. I like how you mentioned that Hiei only insults Kurama when he's upset over something. That was a very interesting touch to the chapter.
The part where you mentioned 'Hiei glaring at the sky to be too blue'....brought a mental image of Hiei, sulking, pouting, glaring at the sky. (Aaahh...mucho yum!)
This is a review for both the chapters, as I just got to reading them together.
I look forward to your next update. Please update whenever you can.
To get to this review...
You have a very distinctive style and I see you improving with every fic you write. You also have some of the cutest smut moments between Kurama and Hiei, however brief they may be. I'm always looking forward to reading some of your work. I haven't been reading fanfics lately, not as much as I would like to. I'm reviewing as soon as I got a chance to.
This fic hasn't disappointed me, either. I like how you mentioned that Hiei only insults Kurama when he's upset over something. That was a very interesting touch to the chapter.
The part where you mentioned 'Hiei glaring at the sky to be too blue'....brought a mental image of Hiei, sulking, pouting, glaring at the sky. (Aaahh...mucho yum!)
This is a review for both the chapters, as I just got to reading them together.
I look forward to your next update. Please update whenever you can.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay so I am leaving for college here in about 15 minutes, saw that this was updated and just had to read! I loved this chapter... it was quite interesting... I love fight scenes that get a little... shall we say hot? Hehehe I also liked the fact that Hiei is so damn tempermental at the moment and the whole "make me" scene I could so picture. Very well done, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Frustation is an apt title for this piece... it perfectly reflects the pent up emotions of both protagonists. Is there an easy resolution? I wonder.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I love how you got Hiei's character! Please tell me the lemons coming soon! And will they have turns being on top! I love a uke Kurama as much as the next girl but I love it when Hiei's uke too! I look forward to your next update!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i like kurama's perverted nature
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arrggghhh. You left off at a very painful spot - I WANT TO SEE MORE...and I don't want to wait three days...I'll cry!
No, but really, you did them justice. It's nice to see that the approach to their "realtionship" was complicated and included alot of fighting, because their both very complicated demons and both very dominant - so, truly, what you wrote is what would happen. I like how they go back and forth, and how Kurama can fight AND be a pervert at the same time (I'm currently getting in line to spar with the kitsune if he gropes you while you fight!)
And Island will be up by the middle of next week - you'll understand when you read it - Chapter 3 is currently 45 pages, it's some job to proof and code. Thanks for the jib. :)
No, but really, you did them justice. It's nice to see that the approach to their "realtionship" was complicated and included alot of fighting, because their both very complicated demons and both very dominant - so, truly, what you wrote is what would happen. I like how they go back and forth, and how Kurama can fight AND be a pervert at the same time (I'm currently getting in line to spar with the kitsune if he gropes you while you fight!)
And Island will be up by the middle of next week - you'll understand when you read it - Chapter 3 is currently 45 pages, it's some job to proof and code. Thanks for the jib. :)