rate_review Reviews

nice

oh, just loved this story! And now that youko showed up, it's even better! ^.~ i wonder what will hiei think about it, cause i don't think youko wants to be uke again, and i don't think hiei will accept being uke easily...maybe youko could tied him up? ^^

You know, I almost had a nosebleed reading this, you never fail on delivering the goodness. Where do I begin? The slight asphyxiation, Kurama calling the plant even though he didn't remember, Hiei with the drop of essence on his finger, just the way he talks to Kurama (oh, god...another nosebleed!). I was all dazed after reading this, and then I had to explain to the boyfriend why i had a stupid grin on my face all day.

And you just keep going - I thought that it was going to be the Kurama uke lemon and that's that - but no - you're just a goddess - now I get to see Hiei in all his uke glory too - and Youko! I've said it before and I'll say it again - GOD I LOVE YOU. You know I'm counting the days until your next update!

EVIL, EVIL, EVIL.....I WANT TO KNOW HOW THE FIRE DEMON LIKES GETTING HIS ASS POUNDED BY YOUKOKURAMA....
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS, AND I WANT TO KNOW NOW!!!!!SO PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEEASE, ADD MORE CHAPTERS SOON...
KEEP UP THE GRATE WORK O.K.

That was one helluva love scene... it was erotic and sensuous and so stunningly beautifully written that it left me breathless!!

BRAVA!

ooohh youko gets his turn

Wow what a 3rd chapter and what an imagination you've got (very good).I'm an artist and have the image of them in the
cave in my head,what a drawing its gonna be I hope though with everything else I'm doing right now it won't be for a while.You write very well and I think anyone while reading it can see the action in their heads.And yes nice warning but that should've been at the top
of the story not the bottom.Can't wait for the update

This story is very yummy so far. I really like how Kurama is submitting to and trusting Hiei. With his past, Hiei needs to be trusted. Although the last paragaph makes me crave more. I think Hiei is about to learn that he can, and does, trust Kurama. The bit with the strangulation/choking: very intimate. The trust they are sharing is more intimate than the actual sex, and I think you're doing a wonderful job of protraying the feeling beneath their lust that are fueling them.

I look forward to your next update. You write very well and give your readers wonderful imagery to watch while your story unfolds.

So good to see an update! ^_^
A few typos, but that's not what I'm here for.
I like how you had Hiei refer to Kurama's throat as his 'voice box', as there are couple of instances in the anime that he does call it as that. It only helped to show that it was, indeed, Hiei's view point.
That was very cute!!
Ohh....you just know how to get everyone waiting for the next update, don't you?
Please update whenever you can.
I wait for your next update.
Oh...how I wait!

Holy mother of all hotness... ::Fans herself:: That was beyond hot... lord the whole asphyxiation being included... and how sensual it was. Lord... I feel like I was the one beneath him. That was so awesome! Makes me wonder what the hell you have planned for Youko to do. I can't wait for the update. I actually did make it to class on time with about two minutes to spare LOL. It was worth it though. I look forward to your next update!