rate_review Reviews

I've never actually written one of these before although I've worked to exhaust every YYH yaoi between the Hiei and Kurama pairing I can find. I've never seen such detail and precision in what I've read, I've actually already read these four and intend to go read the others as well. The only thing "negative" is the one typo I found, and as an English oriented individual although I've yet to get a degree I tend to find many of them, is where in...actually I don't remember which paragraph, was the word gaps instead of gasp. Arigato.

P.S. Oh and I really do thank you for the reversal of the normal. It seems as though writers tend to make Hiei submissive simply based on his size, which makes no sense if personality is brought into play.

WOW! That was awesome I LOVED it!!

Ooh, very nice... I esp. like the fact that Kurama got to be both seme and uke. He's usually stuck on the bottom ne? Arigatou for a great fic ^^

It's so funny - in my story, I have Hiei being crazy-loud, and in this arc, he's a completely silent uke. But I like that, it gives him that extra dimension and I can see it so easily.

Like I need to say that I liked it...you know that this story is totally my crack...but I'll say it anyway (because we all love the compliments) I LOVED IT! All you have to do it give the Youko chocolate and rub his ears and he's yours.

And - yeah - unfortunately for the boyfriend, I talk about this stuff non-stop, and when I told him that you put up this story, he actually said "Oh, you've been waiting for this one", although he did kind of do the pat on the head thing when I told him that the lemon was up. Amazingly enough, he is a fan (although a non-yaoi fan), and I point him in the direction of some of the non-yaoi stories (although in my opinion, if it's not yaoified, then you're missing out on half the fun!)

But I babble...this is one of my favourite from you. YEA FOR HCOLLEEN!

Very sexy story and an awesome series. I loved everything about it. I hope you write more.

The Last chapter was very good and a nice surprise with Youko.As always well done though I would'nt mind a sequal to this and delve more into thier starting relationship.When I finish the picture I'll look you up :)

And what a perfect ending.... not only to this story, but to the whole story arc! It doesn't matter if it was short... after all, it's quality, NOT quantity that matters in writing, and this is most definitely QUALITY!

GO YOKO! GO YOKO! GO YOKO! WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY.

Of course i'm not dissapointed...youkoxhiei is always good! ^.~
besides, hiei gets mad really often, so he'll be needing a lot of help with his frustration! ^^ i'm just wondering if he feels something deeper...well, hope you'll let us know soon!

YAY. I loved this chapter it was so awesome! And hot... and sooo hot. I liked how it seemed passionate between him and Youko and Kurama's words at the end was great. I have really enjoyed reading this, and your writing never ceases to amaze me.