rate_review Reviews

Really good fic. I really love Yusuke\Hiei fics where Hiei is well and truely dominated. Especially when the story is as well written as this one.

Aw, Hiei needed to be held, kowaii! Also like Yusuke needing to mark his mate. I thought this fit in quite well with the cannon, and I'm wondering if you're going to write more with angst from the Dark Tournament, or if you're just going to stop here. You could always just write side bars to the cannon scenes like you did with this chapter, now that you've established Hiei's thinking patterns concerning Yusuke.

Go Yusuke! Put that little koorime in his place. Very nice. You really have been able to keep Hiei and Yusuke in character. That's not easy, especially with Hiei. He's so complex, ya know. You've done very, very good. As always, I love the hot and heavy sex, even if it's just a quicky, lol. I was hoping for Yusuke to spank Hiei, so I guess I'll just have to spank Hiei in my fic, LOL. Talk to ya later.

nice

nice

very, very nice. i can, so, see that happening and i loved the method yusuke used to get his point across. *snickers* i'm definitely going to keep my eyes out for more works by you. so until then, ja! ^__^

Of course, another great piece of writing from you, but I wouldn't expect anything less.
Yusuke's possesiveness was terrific, and I liked that he managed to surprise Hiei with his aggression. I don't know - there's something about a bishonen saysing "Mine" while possessing another bishonen that just...does it. I'm glad you tied this story up - I was preturbed by the way Beyond Understanding ended - Yusuke was pretty confused.
And Hiei's soft "I love you" really ended this beautifully.

I liked it very much!
I think at first it was some kind of a flshback after the split up, or so. then I read more and thought oh no they dont! It is more a change of the story in another perpective.
Very good!