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by CrimsonFox234

person silvereyes
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love you story please up date as soon as posible I am anceous to see the next chapter
person Fuzzy Eared (not signed in)
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there. I probably should have reviewed more than this once, but I couldn't helpt myself and just plowed through all of the chapters. As you can guess, I really like this story. I was really surprised when you turned Kurama into a minor. The phone message from his mother along with all the other ways that you are tying this very AU story into the canon are much appreciated. Please keep up the good work. :)
person Nekosune
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! And I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
person darkrosedamael
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooo! great story! one of my favs at the moment. plz update as soon as you can.
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter; however, I'm very worried that Kurama will be forced into betraying Hiei. I like how Kurama is younger than Hiei (and not legal!) and I also like how you showed a little bit of Kurama's family life and why he doesn't come back home. The scenes between Kurama and Hiei are very sweet and very riveting - you write them with alot of chemistry, I'm excited to see how this turns out!
person Another Hiei Lover
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is outstanding, I am like on the edge of my seat here. I kmow that there will be a lemon coming up soon and some other stuff and i just cant wait. Please update soon
person BWinner(Not signed in)
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I have a feling things are about to get really sad though. SO I had better brace myself. Please don't leave me hanging too long though... PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I may die from anticipation other wise.
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHH. I read all the chapters in one go. Now it's all building up. What's Kurama going to do? Can't wait to see what comes next! =]
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Poor Kurama having to choose Hiei or his freedom. And poor Hiei if Kurama betrays his trust. Update soon.
person vixenia
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I wonder what Kurama is going to do. He can't betray hiei...TELL YOMI TO FUCK OFF. YAY