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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great, your plot is awesome! I hope you update soon!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow - I have SO MANY questions now - what will happen to Hiei now that He pissed off Yomi and Karasu? What will happen to Kurama now that they pulled up outside his house? How long will it be before Hiei and Kurama hook up? - you see, I'm plagued, I need answers! AHHHH.
I loved this chapter - it moved the plot along quite nicely. I understand the author's note about the Japan trip, but I do wish I would've seen more. The scene between Kurama and Yomi was disturbing - it's about time Hiei went in there and kicked some ass!
Yea for Crimson Fox! Don't tease me - I need more Model and the Bass now, then my week will be complete!
I loved this chapter - it moved the plot along quite nicely. I understand the author's note about the Japan trip, but I do wish I would've seen more. The scene between Kurama and Yomi was disturbing - it's about time Hiei went in there and kicked some ass!
Yea for Crimson Fox! Don't tease me - I need more Model and the Bass now, then my week will be complete!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger... damn these do suck....
But it will not stop me... and it shouldn't stop you. Keep up the good work. ^^
But it will not stop me... and it shouldn't stop you. Keep up the good work. ^^
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW, Evil Hiei, taking kurama literally. I do hope you update this soon, cause I can't wait to read more of it.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no! what is hiei doing?! he cant take him there. damn yomi! everything was going so good! plz update soon.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty godd so far and what a shocker to see Hiei brought him home(his real home).Is Hiei going to see why he left there?I say ''yes'' hopefully.The Japan chapter was short but still ok(never been there either)but flash backs could be more fun with in the story anyway. Hope you update soon ,cant wait
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GASP. Kurama's home! NONONO. I wanna see more!!!!! ^^;;
Please do update soon.
Please do update soon.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! Can you say, "uh-oh?" I actually really liked how you refrained from going "in depth" as to Yomi and Karasu's dealings with Kurama. You kept this blunt, simple, and mater of fact. It kept the story moving. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! Update! Boo! Kurama's home!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAIIIIIIIIIII mannnn cliffies!!! I hate cliffies. Anyway good chapter. I am glad Hiei got Kurama the hell away from the goddamn club and Karasu and Yomi those sick fuckers ><. Anyway... I love the story as I'm sure I've said a thousand times. Did Hiei take Kurama 'Home" to his family's house? Holy crap I can't wait for the next chapter!