rate_review Reviews

... Are they really gonna wait a year? I don't think Hiei can last that long... or me. I wanna see them... you know. ^_~

*makes disgusting fangirl squee*

I don't know if I missed it the first time I read this (I read it all in one fell swoop the other day, or so I thought) but I just read the chapter with the Gifts and Deals, and I have to say that this just keeps kicking MORE and MORE ass as it goes along... I was wondering what other characters you were going to include, if any.... *is hopeful for Kuro, due to disgusting obsession*

I think you write well and use the PARFAIT amount of description and I love how all of a sudden I can totally see Kurama being a 16-year old boy now instead of some stripper and how freaking OLD Hiei is... *snortles*

Well, yeah.

I am really just trying to think of other ways of bribing you to update with another FABULOUSE CHAPITRE, but I can only assume that all the other folks who have reviewed have said all that needs to be said. Athough I don't think they've given you PLUSHIES!!!! *throws imaginary plushies*

And I hope you don't mind that I drew Kurama in both his nurse and schoolgirl outfits. I have tried to make that rainforest or whatever outfit work, but he always comes out looking like Poison Ivy. I'm not making any money off them, or anything, and I haven't really shown them to anyone of consequence, although, if you were interested in seeing them I reckon I could get my scanner to work or something and put them up. Or send them to you. Seeing as they're doing a whole lot of nothing but sitting in my sketchbook making me cringe whenever people look at it, seeing as they're always all like, "WHERE'S THE TATS?" to which I sigh and I have stopped trying to explain. I have recently transfered to an American Southern school, and they take the lessons learned at Sodom and Gemmorah tres seriousement. For some reason. Which just means they're juste les americains tres stupids.

Eew. There I go rambling, wasting the time you have when you really ought to be doing something else, like perhaps typing up another chapitre filled with intrigue, romance and excitement...!!!

*hints madly*

GOSH!

I am so in LOVE with this story! I like all of your stories, though, but this is my FAVORITE!

In fact, you're one of the few AU authors I like AT ALL, seeing as I like the demons to stay demons and well... other things.

You have SKILLZ with writing that I can not event dream of that make me sad at my pathetic, cliche KuroxKura doujin....

ROCK ON!!!!!

Wow! I just found your fic and it's bloody amazing! I love the way you pictured their realtionship, and Kurama beeing just a kid after all... Beautiful! I really hope you'll write some more soon. I'm anxious to see why Hiei brought Kurama to his parent's house. If theat's where they arrived.

I really love this story. It's a first Hiei/Kurama i've seen that Kurama was underage. Karasu and Yomi are bastards if I can use that term. Poor Poor Kurama, I hope he can forgive Hiei for taking him back home. I really enjoy this story. Please update soon

AND YOU'RE JUST GOING TO LEAVE IT THERE!? Crim how could you!? *cries in a corner* We want more darn it! This is getting realy, really good! Please, please, please update soon! Don't make me beg anymore than that!

This is a wonderfully written story -- full of beautifully depicted, tender scenes between Kurama and Hiei as well as so much angst for the young Kurama.

BRAVA!! Hope to see mpre soon.

Update this soon, please!!! I love this story soooooooo much!!!

Really happy that you're updating. Bad cliffhangers. They are EVIL! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon and keep up the good work.

I love your story!!! Please update real soon!