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by CrimsonFox234

person saiyan_kitsune_foxfire
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a very good chapter pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese contine it was very romantic in the end
person Sil
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! And hiei...34?? I believe none of us expected that! I wanna know what yomi and karasu will do? Are they working together against kurama and hiei? i just hope everything turns right for them!
person LoversPastForgotten
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
34? Damn. Thats a hell of a lot older than Kurama. I hope theres no more angst. I love all the fluff. Update soon!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I thought you would never update but it was worth the wait. I loved Hiei helping Kurama reconcile with his mother. This is a great story, update soon.
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why are you apologizing to me? You delivered on my Hiei and Kurama crack - you gave me a whole chapter of them talking and fooling around a bit and I have NO complaints. I like how you added that Yomi will not forget about them - creepy guys like that have a slimy kind of persistence (poor Yomi - he never gets any love!). And I almost fell out of my seat when Hiei said he was 34! Ha HA.

Hey - you are not alone - alot of times, I don't know where the story is going until I write it, and I can't wait to see where you take this.
person darkrosedamael
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mew. and yet another great chapter! -happy dance- i really do love this fic. it is one of my favs at the moment.
person Cindyip
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Y\Dexy, but HIEI IS THIRTY-FOUR??????!!!!!!!! That's a twist^_^;;
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you updated this story. It's really entertaining. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
person KyoHana
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY -- a new chapter.... life is GOOD!!

What can I say, other than WOW!!! Long-awaited and very well worth it. I love the way you've written both Kurama and Hiei, and the developing relationship between them.... it is just too, too cute.
person Everqueen
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story and great Chapter. I'm glad hiei didn't force Kurama to go home. I'm also glad Kurama talked to his mom. Can't wait for more.