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by CrimsonFox234

person comicfancat
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was going to smoothly and Yomi and Kur?? would pop up somewhere.Wait till Hiei finds out-should be good.
Spacing out for so long isnt to good hope everything is going ok with you,take a couple really deep breaths and figure out
whats buging you the most and try and get some help with .Though if your writting says anything I think you can handle yourself
very well.
person dianaviera
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think u should continue the story and have them finally have sex and get married. that would be good. but the should have some problems but not to much, like have kurama have a very bad day and have hiei come and confert him and they start kissing and they have sex but be very detailed. tell me when u up date it.
person youngwind2
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this stoy so much! I've been looking for good Hiei/Kurama storys but could never really find any. But thanks to you, I have. I hope you update and finish this story
person Cutie_Neko
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I LOVE your stories! You are such a great writer, PLEASE update as soon as you can! ^__^
person Nekosune
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Yamyams, cookies, and pocky for you! ^_^ It's so cute! Kura-chan and his hair products! XP Well, I must say, wonderful! Update soon for yamyams! (sorry I didn't review your last chapter, my internet is down and the library computers have a mature content blocker, which is stupid!)
person krystle
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update please! I like this story so please hurry and update it.
person Yukizora
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd rather you post it very sonner than later!!!!!!!!!^____________^ UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Love it buddy!!!!
person Yukizora
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what I think? magnificent and absolutely wonderous!!! ^___________^Love the story and keep up the terrific work!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON BEFORE I FINISH ALL THE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!
person Weathered
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Yay!!! Another chappie!!! I think I'm in love!!! *dies from happiness*
person NyteKit
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a pretty good fic. i like the slight change you had with Kurama as a stripper. he's not like he is in other fics with him as a stripper. he's different in a very good way. and the age difference! oh man, i did not expect it to be that big! thirty-four?! wow. great job on this fic, though! yea, the villains have kind of disappeared, but the fic is wonderful without them. so, just keep it up is all i can say. and update soon!