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by CrimsonFox234

schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has alot of promise. I want to know more about Kurama being so defensive on the "be a man" issue. I love it when Hiei is uptight, it makes me snicker. Also: can I get one order of Kurama in a nurse costume?
person comicfancat
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad,no not bad at all for a starter and I hope you finish it.I know I can't wait for
the next update and hope that its soon.There are alot of ways you can play this it will be
fun to see what you come up with.
person PK
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please write more soon.
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I haven't seen one quite like this before. I'm enjoying it, I hope you decide to continue. Update soon please.
person Diane
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I liked it & would like to see where you're going with this.
person Everqueen
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start of the story. I really liked it. Can't wait for more.
person Edogawa Conan
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter.
person M_Gray
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a real good start ^^ Update soon!
person RyouKitsune
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noy bad... but I think you should finish you're other stories first. I'm dieing to know how If they'd been human ends.
person Tina
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please do continue. You have me hooked. Please update soon. I love your Yu Yu/HieixKurama fics. ~Tina