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by CrimsonFox234

person comicfancat
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you chose to do this story.:) This idea has alot going for it abd you can do quit lot with it.Can't wait to see what you come up with ,hope you update soon.
person Edogawa Conan
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! When is the going to be a lemon?
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute - yes, I've noticed that Kurama is always a whore/in women's clothing in your stories, but you won't hear any complaints from me on that. You have a really good grasp on dialogue (something I need to work on myself), and I'd like to see more Karasu. This is very promising, I'd like to see Kurama and Hiei work through their pain together!

So, Sunday at 330am? What happens then?
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Somehow i can easily picture Kurama in a school girl outfit... Not a bad mental imagine if I do say so myself lol Good chapter, I look forward to reading about their next meeting. Update soon please.
person Lady Aqualyne
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dudeeeee come onnnn. Please update soon. I want to know what happens!!!! Great story I really like it.
person Remy
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good update soon okay*smiles*
person tinyteeth
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You will continue or I shall take all of your YYH plushies and hold them hostage until you do.
*hold p a black permenate marker*

I just drank a double shot of pixie laced Mountain Dew. I am feeling artisty and have sugar induced sense of bravery so I am not afriad to draw a beard and buck-teeth on Hiei's cute little face.
person PK
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! update soon I just love this.
person StrawberryTears
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like your story! You should keep on writing...!
person Clara
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story can't wait to see how it develops!