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by CrimsonFox234

person LoversPastForgotten
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kurama! Hiei just keeps pushimg him away. I hope you dont make Kurama a spy, that'll just suck. Update soon! ^___^!
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Picks self up off floor after reading about Kurama riding Hiei's lap: Where is my drool bucket?

I don't know how you do it, but you managed to mix wonderful dialogue and characterization with alot of hotness. I loved how they talked, then fooled around, then talked some more, then fooled around some more...

You know, I'm going to cry if you're going to do what I think you're going to do in the next chapter. Hiei is so skittish! I hope Karasu and Yomi don't ruin things for them.

I loved it - well-written, I like how you use dialogue to really get to the heart of the characters.
person Jicky
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no evil twists >"< btw i almost didn't notice, but u replied me in ch3 rite? @_@
man i wana see them get together T^T
oh i can speak, well learning, a few languages too =P
will they still go to Japan together?
will they have there romance there? oooh that'd be cool XD
great chapters, keep it up >_
person darkrosedamael
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooo! that was so mean. i hate cliffs plzplzplzplz update this!
person LoversPastForgotten
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How is it that you can write so many good stories at once? You have incredible talent! Update all your stories soon!
person Shawaazu
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haven't been on AFF for a few days. Anyway, this is getting really good. Seeing the little chapter preveiw makes me really excited to read the next chapter.
person Shuichi Shindou
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! OMG! I love this fic you better give me more! *whines*
person comicfancat
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter so far,wondering how your going to have Kewa and Yusukw find out though.
And are Hiei and Kurama going to conimate before or during the trip to Japan
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why are you apologizing about Model and the Bass? Don't make me cry!

But anyway - I really hope Murkuro doesn't screw things up for Hiei and Kurama - because as reluctant as Hiei is, Kurama is the type that can be easily hurt, and Mukuro could ruin all the progress they have made together. Kurama does seem to be very sensitive in this story, so Hiei has to be careful about certain things.

Of course, I enjoyed the chapter - it was nice and long too! You made my Thursday!

And you actually inspired me to try my hand at alternate universe (as you are the goddess of AU), so I should have something posted soon as well.

Yea for Hiei and Kurama!
person Mini
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAAYYY AN UPDATE!!! This really is a good story so Ihope you update again soon.