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by CrimsonFox234

person Evelyn
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's one of my favorites. yep, your stories always seem to make it onto my favorite list.
I guess it's cuz your really talented at writing.
Update soon! ^_^
Eve
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY another chapter. I liked this one. Poor Kurama... how dare they use and abuse him ><. Grrr I hope they die. LOL. Seriously though I have no idea how this one is going to turn out. I think Kurama should tell Hiei and Hiei get some revenge of his own ROFLMAO. My own sick and twistedness is showing in how tired I am. Wow... only 2am here in Arizona and I'm about to drop dead. Anyway wanted to leave you a review telling you how awesome this chapter was and how much I like this story. I look forward to what you plan on doing and the next chapter.
person LoversPastForgotten
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope everything turns out okay! I dont want to see them sad... Update soon!
person jay
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its really good keep it going man i love it!!
person Everqueen
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had read the first chapter or two before, but had forgotten this story, I must say, the last 4 chapters are really good and I like the twists and turns your story is taking. Poor Shuuichi, being kicked out for being gay by his family and then being used by Karasu and Yomi like that. I love Hiei's personality in this story, very cool. I can't wait to read more and am going to make sure I keep track of this story now.
person Shuichi Shindou
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great! Just like always! I love your fics and this is one of my favs. Too bad that Yomi wants to make kurama do something very bad to hiei... Kurama shouldn't do that and just run offa nd be with hiei forever! *twinklie eyes* a fairy tale hehe! Keep writing
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I can't wait to see what happens next. How much longer until we finally get a lemon? Soon or are you going to keep toturing us like this? Please update soon and keep up the good work.
person Another-Hiei-Lover
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is outstanding! I must know what happends next. I might become a member of this site soon and put up some fanficitons that i have on another site, so i would like you to tell me how you think when i finally get them up. I cant wait for the next chapter! I love the stories where tehy make Kurama a stripper, it si soo funny (well i my mind it is). Keep up the godo work! Ja Ne!
person BWinner(Not signed in)
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! Oh gods please contine this soon! This cliffie is going to drive me CRAZY! I really mean that! I love this story! As I do all your others of course... but the others don't leave off at such a cruel spot! I certainly hope you get the chance to update ASAP!
person Shuichi Shindou
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you better post more soon crimson! I want to know moooreeee!!!