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for Broken Luck

by mistryl

schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update plz i want to know what happen.
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O You... mean.. mean writer.. HOW CAN U END IT HERE????
HOWWWW!!! Ç.Ç Please continue? Please, please, please!! =)
person Anon
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh!!! plz update i love where thisis going. update soon ill be waiting for the next chap. ciao
person pen pen
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap dude that was awesome u have to update so i can see what will happen next!! i luv this story. keep up the good work.
person Lonely lust
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's not fair. The chapter's over already? I really want to read more!! I can't wait. This is a really good peice of writing.
person Cilla
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa How he know?
person Anon
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg that was cooool!! plz update!! cant wait2 c what happens next ^_^
person acidrain
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chap. poor kurama as soon as he gets a piece of sweet yusuke he gets a spirit gun put to his stomach. update soon. ciao
person Nekosune
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! I'll give you yamyams if you update soon! ^_^
person none
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
evil.. evil... that chapter was like cooool dude. update i want to see wat happens next ^_^