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for Feeling Betrayed

by CrimsonFox234

schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's really good. then again i like anything with Hiei and Kurama. i really liked this. it's the first one i read with a proposal in it
person liz
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue continue continue
person setosgirl
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowser! nice! Very sweet - no smut, I noticed. ^_^ Which didn't really detract from it at all. Bravo.
person Evelyn
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this Great writing like always
person LoversPastForgotten (notloggedin)
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So damn cute! I wuv it so much!
person bob
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww what cute happy ending.
person everqueen
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHE, hiei ruining the moment. Very cute and funny. I enjoyed it.
person Sora
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats so sweet! And i like the tear gem a lot as well, it added a really nice effect and everything. You should actully right more, as Hiei and Kurama now living together in the Makai or something, because its just a story that screams "Write more about me!"
Lol, but thats only if you want ^.~
person Evey
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I so agree with you! In all the stories I write Hiei can cry tear jewels. It's more interesting that way.

Great story!
Eve
person Heero
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh it was great! just like all of your other fics!! and yes Hiei has tear gems but they're not red theyre black ^^ still that was so cute!