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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...okie dokie Yusuke and Kuwabara were pretty OOC...I can't remember if you said that anywhere in your story but they are. Kuwabara would care and Yusuke is too...Kurama-ish. lol Anywho I thought it was too short but still not a bad premise. ^_^ 3/5 stars...
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again your stupidity in writing has amazed me... Please, at least try to write something longer WITH DETAIL then maybe it will be partially good?
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic i'm so relieved no one died!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great. I'm glad everyone's still alive. Please make this a happy ending. Update soon.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH NOOOOO he has to die?? WHAAAA *tear tear* *ahem* now that thats been cleared up... i love it i love it!! please update soon!! :D
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Not expecting him to be the one going to die. But will he really? I mean, Yusuke beat the odds many times. Please update soon! I want to see what he says to the others as his last words.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh! who's going to die???? that was really mean...
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!! Please continue! I wonder who it is? IS it Kuwabara? Please let it be Kuwabara! There's not too many stories about him! I can't wait for you to update! You got me interested! Please update soon!
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked author, not telling us who would die. I know, I know, it's more fun this way. Update soon.