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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! keep going and update soon please and thank you!!!
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, I love it!!!
Tough-guy Hiei blushing is all too delicious~~ (Squeals)
I see conflict coming up soon, Yay~
Tough-guy Hiei blushing is all too delicious~~ (Squeals)
I see conflict coming up soon, Yay~
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's different, I can't wait to read more.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Space out your paragraphs...other than that not half bad. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool fic cant wait for another chappie
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you gonna add more? i want somethin to happen, i was gettin into this story ^^
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like this story continue, its just that there is a lot of dialogue and i think some of that didn't have to be said it could've been them thinking it but other than that it was so awesome!!!! update soon!!!!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that was certainly enjoyable ^_^ honestly a really good fic and a great way to start posting things on aff.net I really liked it and cant wait to see where it goes from there.
Only one bad thing I can say about it thought. When you post it makes your fic alot easyer to read if you put each speach thing (dont know what there called) on a new paragraph.
Apart from that the fic was great love it and cant wait for more
Only one bad thing I can say about it thought. When you post it makes your fic alot easyer to read if you put each speach thing (dont know what there called) on a new paragraph.
Apart from that the fic was great love it and cant wait for more