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for If They'd Been Human

by CrimsonFox234

person darkperfection
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update your killing me here. Do Hiei, and kurama get back together or stay apart Ireally would like to know so please update soon
person Remy
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Crimson Fox Ireally like this story please update soon.
person Mini
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow hiei, and kurama are not together anymore. This story is great please update soon.
person Kei
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good please keep up the good work!
person Kat1132
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have very little sympathy for Kurama. He did something really stupid and now he doesn't like the out come. Sigh, but the sympathy is still there. Can't wait to see what you're planning to do next. Update soon please.
person Annabel
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* Hiei is so ignorant! *still sniffling* Great fic by the way, keep up the good work.
person M_Gray
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic!! Update soon!! ^^
person Everqueen
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I'm sobbing. poor Hiei and Kurama. Why did Kurama continue it? /cries. i hope you update soon before I move.
person Rose
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. I've read a lot of Yu Yu fics, but lately i got more into inu Yasha and Harry Potter. I found this story on one of my many searches (stupid aff, won't let me search in a specific catagory) and went, 'Oh, I forgot about these'. But I'm really glad i read it. This is a very good ficcy, so you should definetly keep going. And as wrong as it sounds, this story is actualy more realistic than some of the other stories that i've read. But you should update quickly, or, knowing me, I'll forget all about this story. If you like stuff like this, than go to http://home.comcast.net/~mhmartini/fanfics.html It's Martina Hanes's story page, and she is REALLY good.

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schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe Kurama did that! I know he wanted to help, but it's...so...wrong! The date chapter was very cute. I like how they won "appropriate" stuffed animals....and I have no problem with Kurama talking dirty to Hiei - I just wished Hiei liked it. This is really just the cutest story - I get so happy when you update!