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for If They'd Been Human

by CrimsonFox234

person comicfancat
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story and yes I vote for a sequal to it and can't wait to see what you come up with.
For being human you still got their personalitys down pretty good.Nice job and can't wait to see what else you
have them doing,after all sex in collage can be fun to . :)
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. The last two chapters were really hot.
person hi
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes there should be a sequel the story was wrote very well
person LoversPastForgotten (notloggedin)
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the greatest story I have read on AFF. I love it to bits, you did an absolutely wonderful job. I would love to read the sequal as long as Hiei and Kurama stay together. You have to update soon, I mean it. You cant possibly keep people waiting. This is such a good story that you have to update really really soon. I look forward to reading more.
person hiei is sexy
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you should hella make a sequal
person Lady Baltimore
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you little devil you lol. Another good one, and it's so cute!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippy, I just love a good reconciliation. Great chapter, update soon.
person jicky
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet~ i love the angst *sniff* ur stories are great!
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! They got back together (I didn't really doubt, but I wanted to see how it happened). That letter was so sweet - Kurama should have sent that over in the first place! Very cute - promise me a lemon in the next chapter? Pleeze?
person Fizzy
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's sad, poor Hiei and Kurama, I really like your story, I just started reading Yu Yu Fanfiction and this was a good one to start on! Thanks a bunch...could you maybe let me know when you update? if not...I'll check back..Until We Meet Again