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I LOVED that side story, especially the confusion on who was saying what. Lol, I laughed and had to reread it a few times, kept losing my spot, but oh yeah, that was a good chapter. Keep them going like that and all will be good.

Oh I absolutely loved that story. I just finished reading the whole thing from start to finish! I'm not the biggest fan of AUs but I found that I completely forgot that the characters were supposed to be demons, etc. It just fit so well that it was just as "if they'd been human." My applause has been earned indeed. I might have to save the sequel for another day, but I will definitely be checking that out. I love how the relationship developed sweetly and slowly. There wasn't sex every time the reader turned around, but there was enough to keep us nice and happy. The only complaint that I have was that you really ignored the possibilities that could have been explored by developing the characters and their outside lives a little bit more. I would have liked to see how Hiei's gang came in to play more, or maybe even more intrigue with Kurama and his clients. I just felt that those elements which would have made this a really tremendous story and not just a fanfic were missing.

i love this story so much the should definely be a sequeal

your a great writer i wish i could write like you

It's fianlly finished and I couldn't be happier! This is such a great story with so many ups and downs and wonderous plot twists! I couldn't tear my eyes from it, the compulsion to keep reading just drove me forward! You should feel very proud too, it's 11:44pm where I live and I still have homework to do, plus early classes tomorrow. See how much I loved your story! SEE! I screwed myself over all for this... Thank you for making your story great enough to be worth it!

That was a really good story! I finished it in one sitting. But sadly now...I must go. Toodaloo...and yes, I would love the sequel!!!!!

That story was great.I'd love it if you made a sequel.

That was the best freaking story I have ever read. Seriously! And YES I WANT A SEQUAL! How can anyone not want to read more of what happens to them! Write te sequal soon. PLEASE! ^___^!

You are a rare breed in fanfiction - you actually finish stories! They should put you in a museum or something!
I really enjoyed this one, and I loved the Side Story - you just can't seem to get Kurama out of women's clothes, now, can you? (The previous statement is in no way a complaint, in fact - BlueUtopiah loves Kurama any way she can get him!)

i love your story and the ending was great! I would definitely want a sequal! Yay !

That was great! ^^ A sequel would be a real kickass thing for this story. Though, not until you finish your other stories first, hehe. Those are great, too ^^ I liked the last chapter to bits and peices. Who knew Hiei could be such a tease? o_O;;; Oh, they're so cute together ^^ Keep up the fan-tabulous work!