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for Cruel Fates

by superjmm

person Twilight
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interestine please write more!!!!
person kyli the wolf hanyou
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Dark Wolf
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM



Yay! Update! Sesshy won't kill Kurama. It is a good thing that you updated, 'cause I was gettin' bored.
Please update soon! ^___^
person Dark Wolf
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM



Pleeeeease update.
person Hotaru1421@hotmail.com
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please write the first chapter! And many more!!!! If you want, I can beta for you to check for spelling errors and stuff!^-^ Just send me an e-mail and let me know,k?
person Dark Wolf
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can you update anytime soon? Please do. OR ELSE! I can get crazier than I already am. I'm ALMOST as crazy as that Texan Dominic Shade, or so she calls herself.
So please update soon or I'll....hmmmmm running out of ideas on what to do. I'll make Sesshomaru attack Kurama!!!! Yah that's what I'll do!! Please update soon.
person crestfallenpetal
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*just noting: I have changed my name to 'crestfallenpetal' instead of 'falling petal'
person hobosly
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far. I'd like to see more of this story soon. I've never BETA'd for anyone and I wouldn't mind editing for you, but I have a lot of work to do, so I may take a bit to get back to you. There were a few cases where what you were trying to say was unclear, but that could be because of lack of editing. I'm not one to talk though. *sweat drop* I'm the laziest person I know, so I rarely edit my own work. Keep up the good work. This series looks promising. :D
person falling petal
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My, sounds appealing. Kindly, add more please and I wouldn't mind editing for you.