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for Cruel Fates

by superjmm

person Jen
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! The fact that Hiei is starting to be so understanding just make's me tingle all over. I love it, update soon as you can!
person White Panther Leona
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM


This is a really good story. And-

D.W.: Hello!! My computers not working so I'll be using this computer instead!

Leona: Give me my laptop!!

D.W.: Never!!!*runs away*

Leona: Give me that laptop!!!!*runs after*

D.W.: I'll never give it up!!!!*pulls out bow n' arrows*

Leona: Ha! You think that scares me cousin?!!! *pulls out machine gun*

D.W.: Okay!! Okay!!! *throws back laptop but keeps running*

Leona: ^__^ Good story! Update!!!

D.W.: Oh and I can borrow my cousins machine gun and shoot you if I wanted to. Because I could always just use my imagination to
finish the story. *imagines Hiei getting ran over by a train*
person Rei
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww!!!!!!!!Hiei!!!!!!!!!!
person Dark Wolf
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM


Sooo sleepy.....*falls asleep*

Sesshy: Not again! Oi, can't she ever stop falling asleep? She's definitly been training to hard again.....

Akisha(my OC): Well it's not entirely her fault. She's gotta compete in that big archers contest-thingy don't she?

Sesshy: *sighs* Yes, but if she keeps training like this she won't be able to compete.

D.W.: *mumbles in her sleep* *wakes up then yawns* I'm not so sleepy anymore. But, who said I wasn't going to compete
in the archery contest?

Akisha: He did it!! *points directly at Sesshy*

D.W.: Very well then...*cracks knuckles*

Sesshy: O.o *runs as fast as he can away*

D.W.: GET BACK HERE DOG-BREATH!! *swings punches at Sesshy while running after him*
IF YA THINK I CAN'T COMPETE IN THE ARCHERY CONTEST HOW ABOUT A BOXING COMPETITION?!!!!!!!!!!!!!?!?!!!!!
Boy that was a mouthful. *still chasing and throwing punches and kicks that Sesshy can't avoid*
Anyways to Kuramagurl; Your point? I don't care as long as someone, not spesifically meaning you
updates. And it's JUST a fanfic.(a really well writen and good fanfic though) So be afraid; Be VERY afraid!!!!!!!!!!
MUWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person LoudMouth0920
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES yes yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u updated updated!!!! yayay
person Dark Wolf
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM


UPDATE GIRL!!!!OR I SHAL SHOOT BOTH YOU AND KURAMA! *grabs bow n' arrows*
MUAHAHAGHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person InTheShadows
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far I wanna know what happened with the Jagan!! ^^ Anyways update soon!!!

-InTheShadows.
person Cloud_Haven
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'"Get it through your head, if anything, you must be this tall to ride." You said, using Kurama's height as you said it. Kurama got the joke and turned red. It took Yusuke and Kuwabara a couple of minutes before laughing.'*rolling on the floor laughing her ass off the sits up* that was funny...matte....pregnet....well hell...*a chibi Yoko plops on her head*?

Chibi Yoko*holds on to Clouds head and hisses* Mrrrine!

...~.~ ok who gave him sweets!
person Twilight
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dame that must suck peragnet (sp?) Hope you remember him cause honestly how could you forget him :)
person animegirl007
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story and I really like it...my favorite line so far""Get it through your head, if anything, you must be this tall to ride." ....once I read that I couldn't stop laughing....I had a boyfriend already and my going to have a baby.......I think Hiei better explain to me big time what happen....keep it up.....I be waiting...