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I Really like this story. I remembered reading it on another site. And i finally get to read ohter chaps. The story is going good. Keep up the good work! ^-^

I Really like this story. I remembered reading it on another site. And i finally get to read other chaps. The story is going good. Keep up the good work! ^-^

I Really like this story. I remembered reading it on another site. And i finally get to read the other chaps. The story is going good. Keep up the good work! ^-^

I was shocked when she was pregnant, I was shocked when I found out that it's hiei's but i was creeped out when the crazy onna said she wanted to cut my throat after the babies(?) were born.Shocking!! I hope you update sometime in the near future.

I have weird tastes in stories, but I found this one interesting.Please continue!

I finally found your story again....with this new formatted look the site got it was hard to find it again.....I love all the chapters I missed.....keep it coming please....I can't wait to see what kind of power I really have.......

liking the story as far as the last chapter during the lemon i couldnt help but think about this one joke about a couple doing it when the chick was pregnent and when the baby was born he grabed the father and poked his head real hard going "how do you like that buddy huh!?"..lol!!! XD anyways please update soon!

I never thought that a cousin coming over to visit would make so much trouble, anyways I like the new chapter.
To Hiei, I don't like her imagination either, and-

D.W.: Hi!!!!!!!!!!! My computer's still broken!

Leona: Wouldn't you have fixed it by now!?!!?!!!

D.W.: No, I don't like fixing stuff.

Leona: It was a retoracle question, you idiot.

D.W.: Did you know that Hiei wears pink frilly boxers with little chibi Kuwabaras on them?

Leona: O_o *inches slowly away*

D.W.: And did you know that Sesshy wears light purple boxers with chibi Kaguras on them?

Leona: How are you related to me again?

D.W.: Kurama also wears-

Kurama: *puts his hand over her mouth* Now, noone needs to know what my undergarments look like.

D.W.: *pouts* Spoil sport. Hey! I almost forgot that Yusuke wears those white boxers with hearts on them!

Yusuke: Hey!! How'd you know that??

D.W.: Keiko told me. Oops, I wasn't supossed to say that. I also wasn't supposed to say that Keiko was a Peeping Tom and saw all the boys without any clothes on. Oops, I better run far from here before- *gets slapped in the back of the head by Keiko*

Keiko: You'd better run! *starts swinging a bat at me*

D.W.: Ow!! I'm sorry!! I didn't mean to-OW!!! *climbs up a tree* Hah! You can't get me now!!

Keiko: Leona? Can I please borrow your machine gun?

Leona: *devilish grin*

D.W.: Leona!! We're family remember??? Families stick together!! Don't give her the gun!!

Leona: Sure, I'll even help you aim at her. hands Keiko the gun and helps her aim*

D.W.: O_o Update!! *dodges bullets* Before I'm dead!!

AH! GOD DAMN THAT BITCH!
lol, I just don't like Mukuro
^^;
Update sooner this time please!!!

Great chapters. Sorry I didn't review the others. Lazyness always gets to me before school ugh! Well anyways, I liked the chappies and hope you update soon!!!

-InTheShadows.