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for Hindsight

by cillaxox

person Venka
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I was crying as I read it. You should write a sequil where things are going a well as hoped between Yusuke and Kayko and Yusuke returns or Kayko may have understood what was wrong and maybe has a three some or something.
person BWinner(Not logged in)
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful fan fic. it was so moving and gentle, I am happy that Kurama never bashed her. Keiko is a sweet heart and I must admit I am a fan of hers too. I think if you had chosen to make Kurama bad mouth her it would have taken from the over all beauty of your story. This fic moved me, it was very well thought out obviously, and very well written. Brilliant job.
person kit-kit
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet yet sad a perfect combination of both elements.
person Suryallee
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found it good.