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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah *blushes*
Yusuke is such a poor victim, unaware that a little trip to his friends house, would force him to question his sexuality.
overall, this fanfic was a fun read. it didn't feel so convincing with their "whatever happens in this house stay in this house" attitude. its almost as if they secertly put a camera around o_O;
Yusuke is such a poor victim, unaware that a little trip to his friends house, would force him to question his sexuality.
overall, this fanfic was a fun read. it didn't feel so convincing with their "whatever happens in this house stay in this house" attitude. its almost as if they secertly put a camera around o_O;
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, this story is yummy. That's the first description that pops to mind. I can actually picture the two more experienced demons beiing so wonton and casual about this, and Yusuke just trying to keep up. The only suggestion (idea, really, I feel I have no place making a suggestion about an already wonderful story!) I could possibly make is to give Yusuke the ever-popular nosebleed in the middle of a Hiei/Kurama moment (maybe one of the demons wouold lick the blood off... BAD, BAD, DIRTY MIND!). I have not heard of the game before, but it sounds...exciting, yet traumatizing at the same time. I am hooked on this story and look forward to your updates. I also find it to be very well written and light. It's a very happy thing to read. I hope you know what I mean by that, and I mean it as a compliment. It's a great break from the daily angst. The only other thing I can say is that I love it. Very nicely done.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was nice of hiei. lol. at least now he can cool off for a lil bit lol. i always look forward to u updating the fic its one of my faves. cant wait till u update tommmrow. but i do hope u get more sleep. and i know how it feels to sleep just for 3-5 hrs i do it during the wk cuz i have to get up so early to go to work. yuck
:(. ne ways u might get to sleep longer after u finish this story.
:(. ne ways u might get to sleep longer after u finish this story.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yusuke!
(but if he don't want Kurama to be after him... I do want! ^_~)
Yay! I love this...
Sleep well!
Until tomorrow ^^
Bye bye
(but if he don't want Kurama to be after him... I do want! ^_~)
Yay! I love this...
Sleep well!
Until tomorrow ^^
Bye bye
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is getting hot. I think they need more closthes off. Can't wait for tomorrow.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the last chapter...I just read both. Anyway, loved both! OH..I just figured out a way you can get your OC in on this...have her be a friend of Kurama's and have him forget he invited her over and then she joins in. How's that? Ok, now that I got that out, this rocks! I love it and please update soon...hope you get sleep too.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the last two chpts. especially hiei dance hehe. poor yusuke hehe so turned on that's hes finally getting more brave. poor kurama feeling to over dressed. but i think hiei proably wont help him out he might possible but i highly douht it. cuz its hiei we're talking about. cant wait to see whats in the nxt chpt. pls update soon.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes im so happy i loved this chapter all the grinding in the story was making me hot.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this! Another great fic of yours! I can't wait XD
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has gotten more than fun. Thank you for using my suggestion. Making Yusuke feel left out only seemed appropriate. I could tickle Yusuke all day. Of course, I would have a nice long feather to torture him with. I think one of the next turns should be either Hiei or Kurama has to slide their hand down Yusuke's pants and play with him. You'll probably need to get some nipple sucking in there too. God! I'm such a hentai. Oh I know. How about Hiei or Kurama have to tongue fuck Yusuke's ear, hehehehe. You could have someone massage the other's butt. Eventually they'll all need to be naked, LOL Hard-ons all around folks. ^_~ I haven't had this much fun in sooooo long. THANK YOU!!!!!!!!^_^