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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love your fic. To tell you the truth, I never really liked yaoi(did I spell that right?) until now. I really dont mind it anymore.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gotta review story. Must find out what happens. Update soon. Later. Botan
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kurama's dare better be Hiei's fantasy. Great story.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, Okay now we are getting at the meat of this whole fic. lemon, lemon, lemon. These guys are so fucking sexy together it's insane. I love writing lemons it's so much fun. I'm such a hentai ^_~ I think though that since you are getting closer the end of the game, you should lengthen the chapters a bit. I know you're updating like everyday which is awesome, but we all need a little bit more, ne. PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You update so fast that I don;t get the chance to review more. (I'm not complaining about it though, I love it!) Another yummy chapter. I can picture this so clearly. You're doing a great job. AS far as complaining about it ending too soon, this type of story is self limiting. At some point you either need a climax and resolution or it gets stale. You have done a wonderful job of keeping it fresh and building up to a climax. No matter when you end the story, I'm just glad to have been able to have read this much at all. Keep up the great work, and I will try to review more often. I apologize for not doing so before.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the chapter i think its about time yusuke starts getting into it.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm working on a time machine so I can jump into the furure to read tomorows chapter without having to wait fot tomorow to get here.
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually I was currupted before I read this story... but if you want credit I give you all of it. Anyway great chapter. I can't wait to see what kurama's dare is. update soon. Later. Botan
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while...I think chapter 4 or 5....I think. Well anyway, I'm addictied to this story. I don't want it to end...but I'm sure you heard that many times so far. I love this game and the way you write....I can see it happening...imagining it in my head, I now need a new computer chair and new pjs. Hahahaha. This story rocks! Excellent job, and I can't wait for the next chapter, even though it might be a step closer to the end of the story, and game. Update soon!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like sisko's idea n____n
That would be soo good! I don't like to wait
but I REALLY DON'T want this to end soon >_<
I can't wait to read the lemon ^-^
( no no! I CAN wait O_o )
See ya tomorrow! Bye bye ^_~ and sleep well!
That would be soo good! I don't like to wait
but I REALLY DON'T want this to end soon >_<
I can't wait to read the lemon ^-^
( no no! I CAN wait O_o )
See ya tomorrow! Bye bye ^_~ and sleep well!