rate_review Reviews

me myself i think that your building the story up quiet nicely. having us on the edge of our seats. as for the question i would like to see both myself ehhe.

Voyer in the closet? I think I missed something. Anyways, ummm... uhhhh.. I... um... I guess I'll see ya tomorrow 'cause I really have nothing much to say but Poor Hiei, he's been neglected. Poor poor fire koorime. lol Any ways, can't wait for the end. Ja Ne

Hot...hot...hot... Hehe Yusuke's no longer nieve anymore!! ^_~

I can't wait for the next one- though it's sad that it'll be the last chapter. *cries* But all good things must come to an end...

I can't wait for Hiei to get his turn, the poor guy.

great chapter i can't believe the last chapter is tomorrow. i don't really care how you end it they both sounds good.

Yeah... you are more evil now! T_T
But that's why this is so interesting...
You caugh our atention, and make us beg for more!

Oh oh.. poor poor Hiei!
(and poor poor me)

About your question...
Can I see both??
*puppy eyes* Pleeeaaaseee!

Until tomorrow ^______^
Bye bye ^_~

Oh yes, it livied up to the buildup. As for the peeper, it's up to you. My preference would be to keep it among the characters already participating; that gives it a clandestine, private, 'what happens here stays here' feel. I think the voyeur would ruin that. But either way you do it is up to you, and I'm sure either way will be as terrific as the rest of the story. I'll just wait and see what you create.

A very delicious chapter, and I look forward to the next. Also, kudos for good use of the word penultimate. So few people know what it means. So, this means the story will conclude (or climax, I should say) on a Monday. Heh. Who knew that I would ever be looking forward to a Monday....

Wow! Hot 69. That's the way to teach my Yusuke. Now it's Hiei's turn, dun,dun,dun. You've done a wonderful job with this so I would go ahead and end it the way you want. I'm sorry to see this coming to an end. (no pun intended,hehehehehe) ^_~

That chapter was awsome. Please don't neglect Hiei any longer. Don't change the format of the story, It's great the way it is.

I really want to see the ending as you originally planned. I can't wait until the real lemon. XD Hurry and upate, PLEASE!

You are sooooo evil T_T
How could you break it there!?
When its getting better and better!

No no, no "poor Yusuke" ... poor me!

Very hot and funny ^___^

Can't wait!
See ya tomorrow?
Bye bye ^_~